Reviews for Seashore |
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fantacination chapter 1 . 11/4/2010 Truly sweet. ;_; I wish they had all gotten better. And that Aqua could get out and kick ass to save her friends. |
serenbach chapter 1 . 10/4/2010 I loved these, espcially numbers 23, as that's the impression I got of them too, and number 50, because it was so sad, and so perfect. Loved these. :) |
Aschenhimmel chapter 1 . 6/28/2010 You are made of win. Terra x Aqua seriously needs more love. I definitely loved the whole works, especially the last (30-50) prompts. Keep writing! :D |
Marching Madly Onward chapter 1 . 6/15/2010 I never reviewed this when I read it the first time. Shame on me It's a tour de force. You've hit on so many powerful images and emotions in a brisk sentence-a-scene format. I love the juxtaposition of light and dark, old and young, funny and somber. It all flows and rolls together so well. I found 32 "Sorrow" and 50 "Defeat" to be especially poignant. Ah, how sad it is that they're doomed to failure. Well done |
NonupdatingUser chapter 1 . 5/28/2010 Ok, 50 is automatically depressing. :( These sentences are rather well done though |
Karma's Slave chapter 1 . 5/3/2010 aww that was so bittersweet, 44, like killed me because of how true it is. |
The Genius Mage chapter 1 . 5/3/2010 ~42~ Neutral They stand at opposite ends of the spectrum, day and night, light and dark, shadow and sunlight, sun and moon, dawn and twilight; there is no neutral ground between them and maybe that's the only reason it works. and 48 were spectacular! This whole piece was amazing, thanks for writin' it! |