I discovered this story yesterday and have reread it twice. decided I needed to comment. This is awesome! The what if it was Duncan who died is an interesting scenario that I had never thought of. I am impressed that you didn't fall into the AU trap of trying "fix" the characters by doing away with their flaws. I find your characterization to be spot on. The reason I even liked the show to begin with is that each of the characters were multi-dimensional and you have managed to keep that while changing one key fact. I encourage you to keep up the good work as it is rare that I read something where it seems that the writer has managed to capture the full complexity of a character. Even incomplete this is going on my reread stack.

Well written, good dialog, interesting concepts and possibilities, sorry you haven't finished this.

I wish you were going to finish this. I really like this take.

I feel...that you're not going to finish this puppy. That's kind of a tragedy. Because a lot of people do the what if someone else died route, and none of them seem to pull it off like you do. You capture the essence of Veronica Mars as a show when you change things. And you don't change them to be...more likable (for example that one story you wrote where Cassidy found Lilly instead, because it was contrasted with his perspective of the actual events in the series, instead of being a wishful AU, it was a sad introspective piece on how things could have been for everyone). I mean, I don't notice that you don't know the difference between 'know' and 'no,' because it doesn't matter. Your writing has such a flow to it those things just fade away, the flow is almost more a current, it pulls you under and immerses you in the murky cold depths of a story.

VERY interesting to see the table is turned and to see Logan as an outcast and trying to solve the murder! Awesome. I kinda missed Wallace, Veronica, and Mac though... I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

How does this not have a million reviews? I love it. Please please continue.

Interesting. :) Hopefully there will be more.

story got lost on me a little... sorry... however your summary is one of THE BEST i have ever read i had to read it a few times cause i liked the line so much...again sorry about not really liking your sorry ( especially didn't like the whole veronica and Logan sleeping with each other right off the bat and the whole veronica being blamed for the murder... totally thought she would be an 09er in the scenario) anyways good luck.. sorry... and really loved the summary

This is amazing! eagerly awaiting more

A very interesting alternative reality you've built here. Nice going.

I don't really ever review stories, but i have to say that i really love all of your work. I am a big fan of yours and i love veronica mars and i have added alot of your fantastic writing to my favorites. xx

Wow. I have to say, that was an interesting first chapter. I really loved how you put Logan in Veronica's place; that would make any story about 50x more interesting.

You, my friend, have got the right idea and your writing is superb. I cannot wait to read on, as I hope this will be as great as it's opening was.

I really enjoyed this chapter. I don't think I reviewed the last chapter, but I applaud the boldness of it. I think the idea of Logan really being an outsider is great. The only real question I have is why Meg invited him to the party? But what ever, now Logan can go all detective for Meg. I have one complaint about that though. Logan is all emotion, impulse, and passion- I don't think he could ever efficiently become a calculating PI on like Veronica. You should consider that as you write. Over all, great stuff!

Mmh, I have a good idea about what might have happened to Madison. I suppose you're using the serial rapist plot, like in season 3. Now is it Mercer or Cassidy or someone else.

Argh, I want to know. lol.

Still very interesting. This chapter was more sad and angsty than other but I loved it. You use very well The fact that Logan's been abused in so many ways.

More please!

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