First off, i would like to point out that yes, i am planning on harassing you with numerous , gotta say i loved this story, i found it realy impressive. Esp. the little touches like highlighting their different styles in clothes, their different reactions to the rain and the use of the verb "snaked" for crowley. :D genius.

This was very pretty. I loved Crowley's reaction.

Really sweet. I can so picture Crowley cursing at the clouds while Aziraphale is enjoying each and every drop.

Really an adorable story.:)

It's so cute to see a Crowley speechless.:D

Nice work.:)

Lovely, just lovely!