It's going great! I appreciate these stories deeply. Julieta

Just finished all 4 characters. Oh I wish you'd come back to this story.

Oh no, story is unfinished...

great chapter, great story! please update soon!

update soon next chapter please

i like the idea but i hope michael has missions instead of bein all locked up. i always did like bly tho

please don't abandon this did a great job on the past 4 chapters and i enjoy reading them, i felt the pain from the first and second chapter.

Great chapter, but what happened to Michael?

I could tell it was a filer and it didn't intrest me that much, but it was enough that i liked it. Plus i know that there will be better ones to come.

-Ember:)

Yay! I'm glad you continue writing this story and I can not wait to see what you have in store!

It was interesting to read something from Sam in first person. I don't think I've ever run into that. To tell the truth, I'm not sure how well it worked, but that could be simply because he doesn't seem to be as complex as Fi or Michael.

Other than that, I can't really say much since it was pretty much a filler. :) Can't wait for more, though!

BE

i loved this but that was TORTURE because Michael and Fi didn't get to reunited. anyway i loved it all the same

great chapter! what show is the quote from?

amazing story, but I wish you would continue it! you're an awesome writer, keep up the good work.

Oh, I like this! I could totally picture Michael in the jail cell building that phone. I hope we'll get a chapter 3...