Reviews for Homework help
the hotpocket hunter chapter 1 . 7/30/2012
Oh, that is so cute!
General Maraxus chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Brilliant XD
Troublesome Dragon chapter 1 . 10/20/2010
It is a cute little story. Judai wouldn't be one to grasp the big picture right away would he?
Z3R0-TH3-H3R0 chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
Funny, with a mix of cutness! Instant favorite!

P.S. Thanks for reviewing my story, an here is your cookie! Good luck and best wishes!

-XD
Talonted chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Whoa, this is really cute! Who knew Yubel could solve math problems for our little hero Juudai?

Like those two reviewers that have already reviewed before me, you could use a few commas. It was a story well done. Great job and I hope you get more stuff up because this was awesome.

I personally don't like Yubel/Juudai things, (I love Fianceshipping) but this is a complete exception!

-Rina ("anime-heroine")

*believers never die~
reminiscent-afterthought chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Really cute. Just watch your grammer. In some places, you've used a full stop instead of a comma.

eg. But I have to try. She thought.

should be: But I have to try, she thought.

Using the comas helps with the flow, otherwise when I'm reading, some of the pauses are unnecessarily long. You should also try to use the commas to break longer sentences into smaller ones, as that has more impact by introducing breaks and a change in tempo.

And there's also the where/were confusion, but I think Higuchimon mentioned that. But overall, it was a very good story, so please don't get discouraged by anything I said.

Sorry its kinda long.
Higuchimon chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Oh, this is absolutely *adorable*! Little chibi!Juudai and Yubel. Hardly anyone writes the cute moments like this, and this was a very delicious contribution.

You might want to read it over a bit more, though. The first couple of times you have "where", it should be "were". I.e., "he didn't know what you where supposed to do." and "And it's not like his parents where home to help him." Those should both be "he didn't know what you were supposed to do" and "And it's not like his parents were home to help him".

You could probably use a few more commas, too. Commas save lives! Compare "Let's eat Grandpa!" to "Let's eat, Grandpa!" See what I mean?

But overall, a very cute piece of work that was quite fun to read.