sexy and sweet!

It's cute how Seth's attitude towards Atem is almost worshipful here. And it's nice to see someone who portrays Atem as a good king, despite all the fanon that says otherwise!

I wanted to tear up! It was so deep & emotional; very poetic in a sense. Loved it!

AWE! So Cute... And stuff... I loved it!

Love it, I hope you continue this!

This story is just PERFECTION. Seriously, I couldn't ask for a better fic. The way it was written, the way the characters acted, it was BRILLIANT. You have made my love for AtemxSeth even stronger. Thank you, and please write more.

Mew Mew Radish '.'

aww cute and well just great!

This was amazing! I loved it so much! Your such an amazing writer! :D

How does this story only have 4 reviews? You deserve so much more! Your writing is phenomenal. The way you structure each sentence almost suits the time period itself. You somehow managed to give "getting drunk and having sense" a new meaning, a much more beautiful meaning. Bravo.

Very well done. I enjoyed it a lot!

Ou, that was just gorgeous. I loved it! I haven't read a Seth/Atem pairing in awhile, but that was probably the best one I ever remember reading.

Your style of writing paints such wonderfully vivid and beautiful pictures in my mind . I can see this really happening. You depcited the characters so well too. I was always a fan of Eygptian history (probably what made me like Yugioh), and the way they talked and thought, it was just perfect.

Thanks for the wonderful one-shot.

You have a beautiful way with words. Fantastic story. Thank you.