YOUR WELCOME! :)

I liked your take on how Thresh died. It was different than I had pictured in the book, but you are right in the fact that the book never specifies who killed Thresh. Good job! I really like this story. My only complaint is that District 5 main industry in power, not cattle. That's district 10 (although I'm sure someone has already pointed this out to you.) P.s. I also liked Foxface's (holly's) prize from the feast. I always just figured that there was food in the backpack.

I loved it! Except for one thing... District 5 is Power not Agriculture, silly!

District 5 is POWER. 10 is livestock.

This is probably one of the most canon Foxface stories I've read! Props for accomplishing that :) It was also very enjoyable and well-written.

DAMN IT, why did Foxface have to die? If she hadn't eaten those berries, she would've won.

Thanks for doing her justice! You writing is great.

Oh wow, Foxface's point of view! This will be interesting!

max is right. holly is wicked smart

The district foxface is from, 5, isn't the livestock district. It works with power. Electric, solar, and nucleur. The livestock district is 10.

Hello, not sure you'll get this but anyway, I jut wanted to say you are an extremely talented author. Though, there's at least two things-if you don't mind my saying so- that keepthis from being pefect.

One would be the name Holly, it's just a bit too...common. Second would be her relationship with Dune. They were very fun and well written but I think it jumped fast, kind of like with Katniss and Peeta, but the difference is they did have a little history where as Holly and Dune didn't.

All in all Terrific. :)

I think it was a great book minus a few minor errors made from the huger games book like the first time you mentioned the Capitol you spelled it like capital like "I hate the capital." where in hunger games it would be " I hate the capitol" but that was the only error I saw and it was only made once it was a great book I love how you decided since they never tell either her name or who killed Thresh you named her Holly gave her a backstory and decided that Cato didn't kill Thresh that Holly did it was very good I enjoyed reading it thank you for writing about a tribute who wasn't Katniss now I want to see if someone has written anything about any of the other tributes!

This story was great! truly one of the best i've read about Foxface. i love the irony of teh nightlock. hehe, and my name is Holly, so that just made it ten times better! :)

Wow. That was amazing. You really have a talent. Have you ever thought about writing your own hunger games with your own characters and twists - thouh you portrayed foxface perfectly, I think, showing that for the games, a bit like Katniss, she also puts on an act! It was great. Really great.

This is really good. I love it how you've portrayed foxface's (no-sorry, holly's) story. I always liked her character and wondered what her story would be like and your interpretation is great.

Overall, very nice work! I like how you developed Holly's character, giving her a distinct personality. Some other stories I've read make her too similar to Katniss. You made her her own person, more vulnerable and, in a way, more resourceful. Oh, and congratulations on finishing the story. I know from experience what an adventure that can be...