Okay. I love the story but the sick voice is REEEAAAAAALLLLLYYYY frickin annoying and sometimes I cant tell what you're trying to write.

I usually cringe at this point in stories but you're doing really great! I can't wait to keep on reading. Even this review is irritating because I want to continue so much! Kudos

this is a really good story, sorry I'm reviewing so late :\ however I'm a huge fan of your writing and keep up the good work (if you're still writing, that is)

It's so beautiful...

(Chapter 17) You know when I read the kiss scene, I was reminded of Taylor Swift's 'Sparks fly'.

Haha, trust me I tend to give more reviews to completed stories!
I tend to review when I have finished reading the story, so you can expect a lengthy review from me!
Love the story so far, you have me hooked!
-ISS 3

So, seven years later and I am reading and loving it! You wrote this story so well. Although I think they should have been a year older, they are definitely mature enough for it:D

You are so good at writing fast moving games like this! Btw. I love your story :)

what does ttg at the line breaks mean?

Yes. I know, you wrote this seven years ago, but still, I'm reviewing...BUT THIS FANFIC IS SO AWESOME! Just wanted to say that...Sorry if I brought you back to old fanfics, but really, it's great;) have a good day:D

So awesome

good story

I love this story it's so amazing this is my second time reading it love ya

awww

My joy at the happy ending is somewhat dampened because right now, I'm reading the sequel, but aside from this – very impressing, fascinating story. Kept me busy for the last… Three hours? Maybe four? I liked this story a lot!
— Hashtag