Okay. Less awkward then I was afraid it would be. Helps that she doesn't look like me. Like this. Wish you had gotten to Legion before your inspiration ran out. I like Legion. ME3 is going to SUCK...eh, I'll deal. Haven't finished the first game yet. I've got time. Just...I'm already attached to that bloody geth! And the entire Rannoch thing...ouch. Just...ouch...

This is...surprisingly hard to read. There's nothing wrong with the story it's just...I really REALLY like Garrus...and your Shepard's name...is spelt EXACTLY the same way as my first name. It's...creepy...cause I am more than slightly obsessed with said turian...and find his species really nice to look at... Kind of a problem... *slaps self upside the head* STOP FANTASIZING DAMMIT! Gonna keep reading. This is just...um...awkward for me... Cra-a-a-ap...

Very good job writing the action scenes! You kept a good pacing so that it never felt bogged down and the times that you DID slow it down hit all the right spots. Nice job!

Again, very strong dialogue. I didn't feel that Tali was OoC at all- I think it's reasonable to assume that she and Shepard had enough history that they could have a deep realationship.

I will say that this chapter felt a bit unpolished to me. There were several typos and some sentences that didn't flow well. It WAS a bit distracting at times, but this is definitely a good enough story that I was able to look past them and continue on.

Can't wait to see what's next.

I liked this chapter. Again, very believable dialogue. I love how Garrus is a bit oblivous to Shepard's inner-turmoil. You've done a good job of showing that their relationship is more than skin-deep, particularly in the way Garrus takes care of her without being too warm and fuzzy or wishy-washy.

I liked this intro chapter. I felt the dialogue between Shepard and Garrus felt spot-on. It was just the right amount of banter and subduded flirting to keep it believeable.

The last part about Shepard always having loved Garrus felt a little awkward to me, but I enjoyed the first part enough to continue reading and see where this goes.

*flails arms around* AN UPDATE! This is one of my favorite fanfics and i love it that you have updated it again. I just hope you can update it again soon :)

*flails arms around* AN UPDATE ! I love this fanfiction and this chapter. I just hope you don't leave it long until you update again.

I like your story, great job portraying all the characters! Cant wait for the next chappie. :D

I just started with this site, and this story is my favorite so far! I love how this story is going, and I also can't wait to see more of it. Well, just as long as you don't end up killing Shepard or Garrus in the end. If you do that I will end up instantly hating you :P

Awesome chapter, I love it, more please!)

was so totally worth re-reading, but i love how you ended it actually i still am in need of more but it just ended at a cliff hanger perfectly in my mind eeee i need more xD

Awesome story, you got the characters dead on i think :) keep up the great work _

brilliant! Got me all excited for the next one! I really hope you can finish soon, you are a great writer. You know how to put heart and emotion into your words. Amazing.

Can't wait for the next chapter