this is good and becuz it is so good it is so sad. i almost cried and it was painful to read. i felt so sorry for sam.

I support elleelle's idea.. please, another chap;) (togerther this time!)

This is so beautifully written 3 Love your style, The part with the kid and the last sentences nearly made me cry :(

i really liked it. would love to see a sequel with her back home with jack

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful piece of emotionally written art. You made me cry, but that's good. Goes to show how wonderfully written this was.

I enjoyed this. Very good.

This was so beautifully written and so heartbreaking. You did such a wonderful job capturing that wonderful essence of Jack & Sam and what I would think would be an "eternal hell." Lovely, lovely, lovely!

Excellent but so sad.

made me cry

Well done.

talk about angst. that was very well written and grabbed me by the tear ducts. i could feel her pain!

It's always Christmas in my book ;) This one did make me sad, but like all of us without Jack or Sam on Friday nights we always have our dreams :)

A very sad story. That does not mean I did not like it. Christmas in another timeline without your friends, without those you care about is hell.

:-)

Wonderfully angsty :) Very nice. Only thing... you switch tenses towards the end! LOL

Wonderful story, thanks.

That was well done and well written. Thanks for sharing. And.. you know. Angst. And canon. :) - Jenn