Dear God why? The twerp is 7 years younger than Musashi. 7! And he's a kid.

Short and sweet! Loved it!

Great little story I liked it !

all you ppl who don't get it make my head want to explode Jessie is younger qoute younger then Brock.

That was amazing. I loved it so much.

Rose :D

D: isn't there more to this story?

I would love to read more 8D I love it Neopuff!

Its such a great story!

i wanna read more :DDD

Very funny (_) A few grammar mistakes here and there, but for the most part it was pretty good. Keep it up! Might I suggest another meeting between Brock and Jessie? Just to see how Brock is going to go about trying to woo his latest love. I'd like to see that!

I feel like writing Meowth's dialogue in general can never be anything but awkward, but other than that, I thought it was pretty funny. My biggest complaint would be that it was somehow too serious. I know it wasn't serious, but since this is pokemon, I think it would be funnier if you somehow got MORE over the top.

But I enjoyed it. :)

Lol that was totally FUNNY! I've always wanted to see that in a episode of the anime. I can just imagine it,

"Jessie, you are beautiful and the only girl I have never tried to flirt with. I declare my undying love for you!"

"Uhhh... (faints)" :)

Ha ha, keep up the humor-ish romances, 'cause they are my fave types.

P.S. Thanks for doing a Brocketshipping fanfic, there are next to no fanfics for small ships :(

That's real good humor right there. Nice piece, this one.

a/n: brocketshipping, the jessie x brock kind. yes, total crack. but i love crack :D i hope somebody out there manages to enjoy this!

Capital. Letters.

Dialogue is written as "Hello," he said or "Hello!" he said, never "Hello." He said or "Hello." he said or "Hello," He said or "Hello" he said. The only exception to this is if the next sentence doesn't contain a speech verb, in which case it's written as "Hello." He grinned, never "Hello," he grinned or "Hello," He grinned. Note that something isn't a speech verb just because it's a sound you make with your mouth, so generally stuff like laughed or giggled is in the second category.

Furthermore, if you're breaking up two complete sentences it's "Hi," he said. "This is it." not "Hi," he said, "this is it." or "Hi," he said "this is it." And if you're breaking up a sentence in the middle, it's "Hi. This," he said, "is it."