I have the most conflicting emotions about this story. On the one hand, you are a superb writer, and I just barreled through the whole thing. On The other hand, it was far more violent and graphic than I could stomach, and I had to force myself through certain scenes.

I have one complaint - when Marik and Ryou first arrived at Ishizu's, they were acting very uncharacterics - completely different from how you'd been portraying them the rest of the time. Also, Ishizu seemed very willing to take them in even though you'd stated in an earlier chapter than she couldn't breathe when in the same room as Marik.

Other than that, great story. You were mostly consistent in your style and voice, and I really like the depth of the story. Good job.

-BtFM

I loved it! :)

You know, it was this fanfiction that began my friggin Yaoi fettish. I hope ur happy... CUZ I AM XD!

How about "Healing Old Wounds

PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE CONTINUE TO THAT SECOND STORY. PLEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASE.

Fawk. That was gold. Can't wait to read the sequel

0.o Wow. That was abrupt :O And so angsty! lol Though I don't really get why Ishizu would act like that, it doesn't seem in her character ...

Oh wow... how bought the Bloody past or Bloody Angel Feathers. I dont know those are the two that came to mond. *

*sigh* I do hope this is a dream. Otherwise...this sucks. Too sudden, too OOC for Ishizu. ._. Bah.

U-UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!

*sobs* M-Marik... RYOU...

How do you come up with this stuff? IT IS CRAZY AND SCARY BUT STILL BLOODY AWESOME.

I AM GOING TO DIE NOW.

YOU RULE.

wow I'm hooked. Strange story... I like it NOw I will finish it

wow I'm hooked. Strange story... I like it NOw I will finish it

wow I'm hooked. Strange story... I like it NOw I will finish it

You know, I was worried about this story when I first read it, but... NOW I LOVE IT!

MY ! MARIK! HOW COULD YOU!