WHat in the hell is going on here? After what I've seen in the last chapter, HOW THE HELL CAN GREGGO BE ALIVE & WELL? OMDG!

OMDG NO! Dear God NO! THis Can't be happening! OMDG NO!

OMDG! I'm surprised that Ecklie's actually working the case with them & seems to be on their side as well!

OMDG!

Totally great!

OMG.. that was amazing! :)

While I was reading this my heart was breaking. I thought when you killed greg it would be a done deal and I sobbed.I almost didnt finish it I was so sad,but I did. THANK YOU for bringing Greg back in the end. This was beautifully writtin and very detialed. I hope to see more of your work.

Awesome, and heart wrenching. Had me going there...great ending.

Well, thank God! I was just about ready to cry! I like the story, but it's so sad-I thought you killed Greg! NOO!

Interesting concept. I must go see if you've written any sequels...

Wow, this is really good. If this story is going the way I think it is, the idea is ingeniuos (forgive the lousy spelling.) This is really detailed and gripping. I hope you update soon.

Sara, Grissom, and Greg's parents are in the room when Greg flatlines and the medical staff pushes then out of the room. In the next sentence, they are standing by the window of the room while they try to revive Greg. Which is it; in or out?

Your really need to have someone copy edit your stories, or re-read yourself after a breather.

You have Nick going down the basement, his mind on his "missing supervisor." Since when is Greg a supervisor, and especially of Nick?

wow! i didn't know the first story, so I thought you had killed our Greg!

amazing story! is it done?

Lovely story. I like it when Greg died, so I'm going to keep it that way in my head.

This definatly looks like its going to be interesting...I can't wait for more!