Reviews for A World In Us |
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narutonarutolove chapter 1 . 11/11/2014 2:36 am, I stayed up reading your addictive stories. -glances at clock- it was so worth it. |
jj chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 very nice |
rebecca chapter 1 . 7/28/2013 I liked it :) |
dirtygirl42 chapter 1 . 12/28/2011 This was amazing. I loved baby!ruka and toddler!kashi. The characterizations throughout were so on point and I loved reading how their relationship developed. It was great to see team 7 too ;-). Terrific work! |
leila-blue chapter 1 . 10/10/2011 i loved it! so beautiful :* |
ReWritten-string-of-stories chapter 1 . 6/24/2011 Good job! |
ActuallyNevis chapter 1 . 6/15/2011 Really, really liked it! Best line ever "Love is like a kunai"! It may be a crappy metaphor...but I loved it! |
PerfectNezumi chapter 1 . 5/28/2011 Beautiful. Baby Iruka is so sweet |
GotCinnamonPunkC13 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011 ...-sobs- Before I go on a rant on how much I love you and this story, I must say the format for this was really really well done. and heres the rant; I LUUUUUUUUUUUURVEEEEEEEE YOU! THIS STORY IT SO AMAZING ...I cried XD |
kirallie chapter 1 . 3/7/2011 This was good. You made Iruka such a cute little kid! |
The Akuma's Sakura Violin chapter 1 . 2/6/2011 Well... umm... wow? That has to be one of the most amazing KakaIru fics I've read, and I'm kinda currently going through a KakaIru faze... Just... wow. Great job. ~A.k.u.r.a. |
Terpichore chapter 1 . 6/30/2010 Geez! You scared me there for a while, I thought you were actually going to kill Iruka and that I would have to end my night crying :P I suck at commenting, but I just wanted to let you know that I think this story is well written and beautiful. This is the third story of yours that I'm reading and they've all been very interesting, so I'm going to read the rest of them (the Naruto ones at least) and really try my best to make myself press that review button and let you know what I think. I am a chronic lurker, but for you and your writing, I'll try to change that! I look forward to reading more. :) |
dkprz chapter 1 . 6/20/2010 This is so breathtakingly beautiful! It left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside after finishing the whole fic, although the "10. First Last" did scare me a little when I read until that part. I thought someone had died or something. Well, luckily everything turned out to be fine. I'm a huge sucker for good ending. :DDD Owh, not to forget about baby Iruka! He is so utterly adorable and lovable and squeezable and glompable and I-can-go-on-forever-able. First word being Kashi? Just how sweet is that? Awwwww~ I so wanna steal him home already. XDDD But despite being all sweet and fluffy for most part of the fic, there're a couple of sections which were really heartbreaking. :'( Like the part where Sakumo died and Kakashi started to act all cold and mean towards Iruka, and the wailing baby Naruto part. Anyway, I loved how you portrayed Sakumo in the story, for him being such a gentle and sometimes even funny dad for Kakashi before his life came to a complete mess. He had always struck me as the "good parent" type of person and it's sad when a lot of fics I read portrayed him as a cold-blooded dad (not that those fics weren't good, it's just that I wish to see more Mr. Nice Guy Sakumo. XD). Very well-wrtten one shot, I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you for writing this amazing piece of work and thank you even more for sharing this with us. :) |
King Stitch chapter 1 . 5/5/2010 I might as well just go and favorite all your stories of Iruka and Kakashi right now. I don't really understand why, but I love your writing style. There's always a cute/interesting between them that, I dunno, doesn't happen a lot now days? .; Lol, anyways: Sometimes the endings feel rushed... then again, I want to just keep on reading! xD |
TheEndofTag chapter 1 . 4/4/2010 aw...this is just beautiful!...totally love! |