Reviews for The Unmentionables? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sad to see that this appears to be the end... But this story has become confusing. Edgecomb said that he came willingly and he agreed, but he was dragged there by a surprise Portkey. SPPEW isn't a mispelling, but the goal of this is still unclear but is something Hermione thinks she needs to hide from Harry. What is the machine Harry apparently ruined? I thought it was to track pregnancies or something along those lines, but it was used to do who-the-fuck-knows to Pany. What was the ritual Fleur did? She was really reluctant to say anything about it. What's happening to Harry's magic to make an Aguamenti sppew semen (pun intended)? What's up with the previous chapter? Hermione started screaming and Harry smashed his head and fell unconscious... is the entire chapter 8 just a delusion? Why is Cho even there is what she wanted was to be shagged by TIM? Harry was entirely incidental to that whole scenario. I like the story and you write good smut, but the unanswered questions are too major to completely immerse ourselves in the sexy times. Not that you have to give all the answers, but it would be nice to actually know what's going on beyond "pimping-out-Harry fundraiser with a secret". Also, I dislike the existence of TIM. It's hypocritical of me since I'm fine with Harry having sex with these other girls, but that's the "in-group". Not only are they screwing TIM, but TIM is sapient and Harry never even knew about his existence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was very funny, and very hot. Possibly the best chapter yet. The others weren't quite so fun after Daphne. Though Dobby was interestong. |
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![]() ![]() "Care for some 'omb Raiding, 'Arry" Tomb Raiding, or Womb Raiding? |
![]() ![]() OH GOD WHAT |
![]() ![]() This is a fun story line. I hope you continue. |
![]() ![]() Harry a jerk. And this is one more Ron bashing story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I Really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The hell! |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() A very naughty Hermione in deed! And in joint venture with Luna AND Daph ! A real deadly combination! Wild fantasy's to boot to! But why has Harry always to be so daft? Clueless about girls, yes, but daft? And as a flier and seeker his awareness and reactions are very fast! But you make him worse than Nev 1. year! Get him up to speed again please! Much more fun when he makes some pay backs to "he's" Girls! :-) (any clues about all "he's" girls? please!) AND: Just wonder about your environment to have all this kinky (day?)(night?) dreams? :-) :-,) Can you sit at all? So quiet! Thank you for your time and naughty tales, and thank you making Hermione as taskmaster! Nobody better than her! |
![]() ![]() Not a bad story really. But the last chapter is one of the stupidest things I've ever read, and apparently it's been abandoned. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting |
![]() ![]() Where the HELL did that come from?! |