Great job, I'd love to read the sequel. ;)

Wow!~~

Love it! At least I am not the only one who hatched those video diaries! I love the spider one. "Nature has been restored"

Hahahah, that was great!

Loved that! French is my favorite class in school, so naturally seeing my favorite characters speaking it was great! Really funny, too! I caught the reference to the magic phrase, and some bits had me in hysterics, like Merlin's "lovely robes" and "sign the goddam treaty already and let's eat!" :D

Hello ! :)

I really like your story !

And your french is very good (I think you can trust me since I'm French :p)

I loved the pronunciation of Arthur !Very funny ! But it's so cute when English people speak French ! That's why all the French girls are screaming when Bradley James tells : "Bonjour la France !" x)

And the end of your fiction...just perfect ! lol

Toutes mes félicitations ;)

You're flipping between formal and informal "you" in your French section. If the blue-eyes bit is supposed to be an Aurthor-to-Merlin phrase, keep it as is. If it's supposed to be a servant-to-Aurthor phrase, switch "tu as" to "vous avez".

The whole "will you sleep with me" is in formal French. If you'd like to make it more intimate/informal, change "voulez-vous" to "as-tu"

cute!

Oh my God! When I read the part from the video diaries about the magic phrase, I nearly fell off my chair in laughter! Very cleaver thought, adding that in!

I grinned through the whole thing x)

You made me happy. I didn't learn French, instead I chose Latin. But when I read something like this ... it makes me wonder xD

Either way, awesome!

hello!

I'm french and ...je vais écrire en français (trop nulle en anglais, sorry lol)

En fait on dit bien : "Vous avez de beaux cheveux." et "Tu as de beaux yeux bleus."

J'ai adoré ta fic!Bravo!

Hahahahaha Love it!

J x

Je ne comprends pas. Je suis Anglais! WAH HEY! :D

Bravo! Merci a vous. Cette histoire est tres bien fait. E bien amusante.

I got quite a kick out of this...very cute. I liked the ending too, very charming innuendo. (I can just imagine M & A practicing French in bed.) Keep the stories coming.

Haha, that was great!

Poor Merlin, he got stuck with teaching that prat another language, but something good came out of it, so that's okay :)

Aw, that was really cute! You had their banter down perfectly :). I totally caught the video diaries reference and was going to comment on it anyway, haha! Nice stuff ;) I'd love to see a sequel to this *grins* :D Perhaps I'll have to bribe you with cookies too? ;)