Reviews for Calamari
Guest chapter 3 . 1/19/2013
More please! this is the best! I really want to know what's going on! please update!
Toby860 chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
I think it should of been a mermaid that rescued and changed harry.
Selonianth chapter 3 . 12/4/2009
more please
greenviking chapter 3 . 9/29/2009
I love you guys so much, this is always a fun read; good luck with the next one!
enteryournamehere5 chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
LOL!
Luiniliel chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
I'm interested in seeing how this story plays out. I'm sure that Harry was taken back down by his adopted papa, but I wonder if it recognized James. Gaah! How exciting, I can't wait for an update.
Darak chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
Hagrid is dead, good, what did they expect attacking a baby squid, that they weren't sentient and thus wouldn't miss their family? Wizards get what they deserve, they live in a world of sentient beast and still believe they can do whatever they want without repercussions ...
xDelta-Ha-chanx chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
GOds! how could they! poor harry! his foster father was just trying to protect him! and did foster father manage to save harry? there was alot on the fight scene but nothing about what happened to harry.
Stygius.Magic chapter 3 . 9/6/2009
awesome chapter... and that end just about ripped me a new one...

though, didn't neville get his rememberball later in the story (by post), and what is harry forgetting...

how did sirus and james know where harry was in the lake?

and finally... go papa giant squid...
Zephros chapter 3 . 9/6/2009
"Russ the guppy and Cory the Koi fish swam over to their friend. Harry had grown a great deal over the past few years. Russ was dwarfed by his friend. He was already a small fish by anyone’s standards, but he disappeared when next to Harry. Even Cory was put to shame by the squid, not even matching a single of Harry’s tentacles in length. The koi was a robust eater however, and his girth was comparable to Harry’s."

When telling people's sizes by comparing to an existing character be sure the reader knows the size of said character...Harry in this case.

"The start of the Hogwarts term created excitement all throughout Europe"

I figured it would only cause excitement in Great Britain.

"James awkwardly whirled himself around. A solid row of mermen warriors stared him down." I thought in GoF that the mermen were afraid of wizards becauase they possessed wands.

Huh...you diffenently had the shock value there with Dumbledore dead, but instead of it being gasp...he's dead? It came off as Where the FUCK did that come from!

I also think the fight scene lasted a few paragraphs too long, it just seemed to drag, though I will admit that the fighting was a lot clearer this time around. Good job on the descriptions, too.

-byl, out.
Lord Blood chapter 2 . 9/3/2009
wow...this is one messed up story. i'm only adding it to my alerts to see how this is gonna continue. i mean really, the cephalapod who lived? what the hell gave you this idea?
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
please update soon!
Score89 chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
wow...this is something that you don't get to see everyday. I've been on for almost eight years now, and I don't recall ever seeing a Harry-squid fic. Hats off to your originality, i hope you continue your story till the end :)
Luiniliel chapter 2 . 8/26/2009
This is so interesting, and cute. Calamari *snort*

Can't really form much of an opinion because the fic is just starting, but it looks like it will develop into a very interesting read. Please update soon.
Lord Sia chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
Wow. Harry the Squid who Lived? Talk about original. I've seen him become a Vampire, Veela, Goblin, Dragon, Snake, Werewolf, Phoenix, Unicorn, Demon, God and a dozen other variants... But never a sea creatur, much less a squid. Like it.
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