Reviews for Windfall
UNNES1000 chapter 13 . 10/15/2017
Don't stop! Please make more chapters and finish this story! I like where it's going!
Better a Freak Than A Fake chapter 13 . 5/30/2016
That was genius! I loved everything about the chapter!

Especially Nutty's false sugar caze to create the baracade. Also how they got Petunia to surrender, using her mysophobia against her!

Hopefully the girls aren't stupid enough to have the kryponut on them. Then again, either could be stupid in different ways.

Anyways, another great chapter and I look foward to more.
Better a Freak Than A Fake chapter 12 . 5/22/2016
Finally finished reading this chapter sorry it took so long.

Now, what was this chapter and what was the last?

Hmm… I don't have much to say here… too druged up (LEGALLY) and will probably need to reread the whole chapter later when I'm a little more sober.
Sayorii-chii chapter 11 . 4/9/2016
I am really into your story so far, I'm really glad you're still continuing it. That is amazing dedication you have. Ohh man, things are getting messy for the three girls. It's exciting to see things slowly spinning out of control. One thing for sure is that they are all in deep trouble, especially their trust for one another unless they all come clean.
Better a Freak Than A Fake chapter 11 . 4/7/2016
I was the only one who reviewed last chapter? Sweet! But kind of sad. This story deserves way more reviews!

Boy will the girls be in a shock when they're each given back a kyptonut that was supposed to be so well hidden by Mime.

I see you're using guns again. *sigh* At least Shifty didn't actually use it but that is one of my biggest pet peeves in HTF fanfictions. There's no guns in HTF. That's an actual rule for the actual show and shouldn't be used in fanworks for the same reason and the only time I can entirely forgive it is relating to Flippy/Fliqpy's war time because that's pretty much inevitable, so much that Operation: Tiger Bomb even had them. The fact that you now broke this twice outside of that exception... well, I won't stop reading your stories because of this but know that I am VERY disappointed in you.

On a better note though, I did really like that first scene with Cuddles and Lumpy, how Lumpy was appearing all agreeable but wasn't actually being agreeable at all.
Better a Freak Than A Fake chapter 10 . 3/23/2016
Well, that is one way to handle despiration, make someone else even more despirate. Poor, poor Nutty. Though, how does that make it easier for them to kidnap Giggles and Petunia? I guess I'll just have to keep reading to find out.

Splendid's death was also fantastic but how does simply omitting the name of the rock make it any safer to publish?

Overall, great chapter and I can't wait to see the rest.
Better a Freak Than A Fake chapter 9 . 3/2/2016
SaenihpNnylf from the HTF Wiki here.

Even though it's not Measures of Acceptabiliy, I do love this story and am super happy to see this updated. I can see that you have not lost your writing ability in the slightest. If anything, it might have gotten even better.

This chapter certainly took a lot of interesting turns that I really hope you will continue this one as it has done nothing but please me and it what I'd expect from a proud Tiny But Mighty member.

Also, I got such a good laugh from Sniffles going to Splendid the Reporter to have him put up an ad to call for Splendid the Superhero.

Keep up the amazing work, Tonifranz. I can only wish I could be as amazing of a writer as you.
ashdash2417 chapter 8 . 4/28/2015
NOOOOO! why must the chapter end?! the story was AMAZING! hope you plan on making more chapters for this story.
Guest chapter 8 . 11/22/2013
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angel chapter 6 . 6/10/2011
random note: i relate to Flaky. First of all, my hair is bright red and i have a impossible to be rid of dandrff even though im not "seen" frightned...like her sudden things are the only things that scare me.(example: our teacher was showing us a scary , we din't notice he clicked a link on it that lead to a video! so.. we thought it was a creepy hider. nope,it was the classic cheap but effictive joke on vyoutube! the pop'n' screamer!the fae wasnt scary, but this was in loud volume on a big projecter. the miute it happned, i ran to the conuer with a loud "WIMPER" and stood, acctully SHAKING VOLIENTLY!I really was!i did that for 5 min strait. i now can't sleep.D:)
Hnnnggg chapter 8 . 6/7/2011
Updateeeeee thiiiiissssss
64maddness chapter 8 . 1/4/2010
this is a good story ,upload soon )
PinkPlagueRat chapter 7 . 9/7/2009
Wow, first I have to say that I find you a famous author who writes insanely long chapters. Btw great chapter!
PinkPlagueRat chapter 6 . 8/29/2009
Yay! Evil Flippy killed somebody and Lifty and Shifty are off to Petunias house! Keep it up this is getting great!
Light Through The Veins chapter 5 . 8/21/2009
I am disappointed in the fact that this story has so little reviews. This is one of the better fics on this part of the site, not only because of the plot, but because of how well you are able to portray each character in an original way while simultaneously being true to the show.

I've been following this story from the beginning, and can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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