Reviews for Shinigami Yagami Raito |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really like the concept of your story! Light as a shinigami while continuing to be kira is something i never really thought about, but enjoyed immensely. You also have a great writing style which made reading this story even better! Thanks for sharing your work :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was strange but hilarious |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was really great... this is a first fanfiction i have read that i really enjoyed and liked that belonged to DEAH NOTE...thank you for sharing.. |
![]() ![]() I really like this twist to canon! Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this, what can I bribe you with so you'll write more multi chaptered death note fics? |
![]() ![]() Love the idea for this story. One nitpicky thing though... In Japanese the word "ne" is used at the end of sentences when asking for agreement. For example: It's hot, isn't it? Would translate to: It's hot, ne? Or in complete Japanese: Atsui desu ne? Thanks for reading my Japanese sentence structure rant! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was really good. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant ending!...and beginning...and middle...And, well, everything! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE LOVE LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha interesting story! |
![]() ![]() Raito is awesome. The smartest of them all. I wish he did return as a Shinigami though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this a lot. I only wish that it was slight longer but loved it all the same. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad to discover you had ANOTHER Death Note fic, LOVE IT AND LOVE YOU! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, I loved the twist you gave to it. |