AMAZING.

Paradise...I like it :) It's nice to see they had a happy ending

I didn't expect anyone to make it out haha, because I didn't want to be disappointed! Well, actually, I did expect Madison to live because I didn't think they would have the guts to kill a child. But you are right, it was so heartbreaking! I'm not sure if I could do it either, I'd like to think I could in a way, but...I don't know. Hopefully I'll never have to find out. That was so cute and..just happy though, especially the ending! I'd like to think that's what happened! Great job!

lol so cute love it! :) very good

Really good. I can't believe they had to kill them. I wish they survived...but no oone survived really. I think they were the most epic kill. (Not including the finally) They did make me cry...

I'm really enjoying reading everyone's takes on this scene. It was such a touching moment in the show and it's been extremely inspirational - and your version doesn't disappoint. I liked how you emphasized the point that it was Chloe's decision to die, that she didn't want to give Wakefield the chance. And the ending was sweet. I'd like to think that that happened :)

I'm in tears reading your beautiful story. I can't believe the writers killed my favorite couple. They were so beautiful together. This is a fitting tribute to them. Thank you.

i felt exactly the same way. i even cried when i saw what happened. this is beautiful Y.Y

You captured that moment perfectly. Got a little tear. The death of Cal and Chloe was to me, by far the saddest in the series so far. I was SO hoping that they would make it to the end. I like how you ended it with them together in the afterlife :)