This fic was awesome! Even if it's never finished it was still a pleasure to read. I'd love summary "chapter" that details how you'd planned to end things (preferably one that doesn't care about canon past where it was when this fic was concieved.

Anyway, I hope you're still out there, writing awesome orginal stories. If and when you publish any I really hope you decide to link to them on your profile, as I'd absoloutely love to read them. Your writing is just so engaging. :)

Oh my god oh my god oh my god Tenten better not die, okay?! That move was pure genius, but she better live! Please?! I know it's been like FOREVER since you've last updated this story, but TENTEN BETTER NOT DIE!

Hi! It's me again. Sorry I keep on popping up so late into the story, but I just needed to point out that your spellcheck has kicked in and replaced Naruto's name with Narrator. Other than that - jeez, I'm getting a headache just SEEING all the misfortune and complications that has struck Konoha all at once. I hope they all come out unscathed. Good luck, Teams 7, 8, 10, Team Gai, Iruka, and Shizune! (_)b

I must say I am very much impressed with your ability to use Kishimoto's universe as a sandbox in order to build your own stories, rather than using his existing decors for the same story with a few new flavours thrown in, I love that!

Ok I do not know what happened to my spacing and punctuation. Makes me sound like an idiot. I had an unhappy not smiley face in the middle and an exclamation point. Anyway this story was wonderful and thank you for posting it.

So awesomeso not doneI am really interested in Gaara's storyline!

I love your story! Update soon!

I hope you're still out there somewhere, doing well.

Brilliant read so far, what happens next? Please continue writing and uploading this wonderful story. I truly have enjoyed it so please upload the whole completed finished story.

Wow, love the au - I think your characterisation is perfect for the altered circumstances. Crossing my fingers you finish it, thanks for sharing

Please, please continue.
I can imagine all the trouble boiling up, beginning to cool down for the various teams only for Iruka to be targeted by iwa/other group once they realize how effective his kids are.
Is Iruka and shizune going to be Konoha's representative/s? If so who's watching over Konoha' ?
Also I can imagine Iruka or someone asking either additional training in seals or asking jiranchi to create alarm seals for sensitive documents.

Whoa, awesome story!

God this fic is just soo epic!

With canon down the drain, fics like this, with no cues from the disaster that was the whole war arc, are even more refreshing and amazing.

I hope you're doing well.

Your stories are alway capivating, and this one and it's prequel are your best works, IMO though, The Children, is a close runner up with its captivating, if creepy, premise.

Hope to see more from you in the future.

As a rejecter of recent canon, gems in the AU genre become even more precious.

Great work! Keep it up. :D

Update please!