I'm usually not a fan of Jack/Juliet, but this is such a well-written fic! Good job :]

A little dark for your favourite couple isn't it? I really thought that the description was beautiful. I like the comparison of his promises to something so cheap and vulgar. It was really a nice touch. You really have a way of working you way into people's minds you know. Kinda creepy...;)

This is so great. Exactly the sort of Jack/Juliet stuff I love. You have a beautiful writing style :D

Its amazing what people are driven to do by love. I love it darling, you do Juliet beautifully. I think its beautifully bittersweet.