Reviews for Inviting Trouble |
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grungeless chapter 5 . 4/11/2019 This fanfic is so good, I just wanted a new update :/ |
Kaizen Kitty chapter 5 . 12/30/2015 :-) it's been 3 years - well, nearly. time for an update! |
Kaizen Kitty chapter 3 . 12/30/2015 :3 great chapter - loads of backstory but wait, shouldn't it be pounds? (not dollars) since Near and Mello are grocery shopping in London (the UK)? as always excellent characterization - I do hope you'll finish this story. it would be such a joy to read. Ha! so Light and Misa are Kira in this AU version as well? |
Kaizen Kitty chapter 2 . 12/28/2015 This this this is really interesting. :-) Got used to your way of stringing words together, and the AU situation is very bery cool and intrigues me. Characterization is spot on and the plot thickens... I also like the detail you include in your descriptions - makes for a good reading experience. XD and lol the fortune cookie! ... :-) smell of moth balls and elderly cat urine? is this taken from first hand experience? I love the way you describe Mello's attire, it's very funny. |
Kaizen Kitty chapter 1 . 12/28/2015 Very well written, and although the sentences are a little too long and too correct to my taste, I must say you did a very fine job on this and had me hooked from the first few paragraphs. A striking representation of Near, Mello, the characterization fits and I'm enjoying the serious tone of this fic. :-) Thank you! |
L chapter 5 . 3/21/2015 I know you're not likely to update this anytime soon, but I want you to know how enjoyable your writing is. I keep coming back to this story due its awesomeness. ) |
serenesorceress chapter 1 . 12/17/2014 Hope you're still interested in continuing this? |
X chapter 5 . 10/19/2014 Good! |
Meiwriter chapter 5 . 8/12/2014 Awesooooooome stooorrrryyyyyy XD lovely writing |
Scully chapter 5 . 9/29/2013 I am really really enjoying this fic! Its hard to find a story where one of the central characters aren't ooc. You do an excellent job! I can't wait to see where this goes. :) |
Rei chapter 5 . 8/18/2013 Aww poor Near, Mello didn't know that his words actually hurt Near. Plus him drinking will only result in recklessness. Good chapter please update soon! |
Rei chapter 4 . 8/18/2013 So Light's dad died?! How and aww poor Mello having to deal with the overload of sweet curtsy of L xD |
Rei chapter 3 . 8/18/2013 That was awesome! So no wonder L and Near live together! I love how Matt is so cool here and when he asked L, "You're not. Uh. Havingsexwithhim?" I swear I laughed cause of how L must have felt. |
Rei chapter 2 . 8/16/2013 Good to see that Kira is the major case in this story and that fortune! Near needs to pay close attention soon :) good chapter and I love that you introduced Light! |
Rei chapter 1 . 8/16/2013 An interesting way to start off the story! It sounds really good :) |