#squealed and melted quietly

This is too much!
too cute!
please be canon Honest Morning Hiroki!

i loved it

This is amazing. Thank you for posting this it is just... So cute...

I certainly prefer this to an honest drunk Hiroki :)

So cute. Thank you.

Congratulations! You've managed to make me smile! The story is so cute, fluffy, and simple, and not in the least bit boring. Thank you for the great read :)

oh my god, hiroki's just too cute!

Simple but nice egoist moments!

d'awww

cute!

heehee Oh Nowaki is so cute when he's being Cheeky but Hiroki so cute when he's blushing and so trying to hide how cute he is!

AWW! Hiro saaaaan~~~ SO CUTE!

haha i wonder how nowaki feels about being ranked below dessert lol. the story was very cute. i enjoyed it lots

I know, me again haha.

But I love what you're doing here with this pairing. You're writing about these sweet moments that could go very well with the manga/anime. Like those scenes we didn't get to see. You're writing them true to their character; a cranky Hiroki even in his sleep and Nowaki just being...sweet and cheeky.

Loved it!

That's cute.

I like Hiro-san that way. There probably was alot that he revieled to Nowaki. . . Hmm. . .?

You should do a second part to it. Yes, I would like that.

Thank you, Avarice, for the sweet story!

Absolute loved it ! *w*

congrats! this short is so good i just had to came up with a really good idea. Also a nice style. it is really well written, and the plot is perfect, the end fits perfectly. I think I really emjoyed it because it is simple, but not plain. As I already told it is just REALLY well written. it doesn't lack anything and there is no word too many! You really caught the character esence and relationship to each other.

LG!

man, i think I have more more than 3 really's there... should fetch my thesaurus...