Cool story

I love it :3

Oh wow...

Cool. Though I would have a look through some chapters. Some have sentences cut in half so the rest is on the next line. Example would be the start of this chapter. *thumbs up*

The story has a great potential but for me I don't know how to feel about all of this it's like... I do not understand much about the situation and I can't focus on the story without wondering about so many things at once while trying to search for the answers in the story. Such as; where are her parents? What year is she in? Is it after the battle with Voldermort or before that? If Bruce is her uncle, then which of her parents is his sibling? But the thing that I really loved in this story it's the position she's in with the relationship with her ex-best friends as well as the story! Usually (if not always) people would make Harry in a similar situation (In some shape or form) and I'm happy that finally somebody is doing something different such as this. By the way about my questions if they're not explained in the story could you send me a message and explain things better for me? I would REALLY appreciate it :)

it is very good

Ohmygeeze..*groan* No offence intended but what is it with Jokerxsomeone romance? it's just plain creepy.

I'm sure you don't want a review with someone yelling at you. Lol. But, its vallet not ballet to park your car

I like the concept quite a bit but the dialog seemed i thought the ending should have been more climactic.

valet

ballet

It's nice, though it reads a bit flat. I'll look at the sequal. If you ever go over it, might I suggest fleshing it out? More backstory, description of the character's emotions, and don't be agraid to use CAPS LOCK and exclaimation points!

Love,

M.

Luv it! mione reminds me a tad of bellatrix :P AWSOME! hehe great story :)

cool

Its to fast.

this is a great chapter . keep up the good work