I want more

Its ok but Sesshomaru attitude is out of his original character

Excellent!

too few explanations -why was akihiko born full demon?
-why did kagome heal so quickly after birth?
-does kagome live a human life or will she age along the lines of sess?
*easiest explanation is that she is somehow becoming demonkin...recommend adding a line or two during the epilogue. btwyour grammar really needs fixing, find yourself a beta.
oh and Sangos father is really really dead at this pointought to change the 'giver of the bride' to kohaku.
laterz

dont know if youll ever get this review but you do know labour generally lasts over 20hrs...

I wish it kept going Cruz. u. are good

awesome! is my only opinion, great job!

Wow, this story has been very good. However, some tips of advice: Grammar. You still mess up choosing some words over others, like many other authors do. A common word would be through and threw. One, (threw) you throw something. Through, however, is something like, 'I went through a wall' or 'He was through with this.' Just small errors, but when they are cleaned up, it makes your work look beautiful. Another thing is to not worry about putting as much detail as you can. The more detail, the better. Notice how most Fanfics that have more than 1500 per chapter seem to have more reviews? They are more cleanly written, and catch (at least mine) attention.

Lastly, just curious, did you use the 'Miko Rage' idea from another book? It sounds the same as another book, Terry Goodkind's 'Wizard's First Rule', but with A miko instead of a Confessor. Just curious.

However, continue writing, and good job so far!

that was a wonderful story! there were a few mistakes but i know that you will become a goo writer with practice, trials and errors. the more you write the stronger your words become.!

aw! thats so cute! i loved it!

THAT WAS THE BEST STORY EVER i loved how sesshomaru died it was very clever and i loved how he kept calling her mate IT WAS SUPER CUTE usually i dont like reading but wow this was awesome. i have no bad things to say about it, it was like wow and i used to be a inuyasha x kagome fan but now im a sesshomaru x kagome fan. oh i LOVED THE BIT WHERE KAGOME DIED AT THE START AMAZING how long did it take you to come up with that idea? u should be a writer lol you put me to shame lol im gutted but WOW AWESOME oh i also loved when kikyo died well to be honest I JUST FREAKIN LOVED THE WHOLE THING BRAVO

Aww.. that was really sweet. _ Such a nice ending. *giggles* I loved in chapter 11 Inuyasha doing a Sesshomaru impersonation. _ That was amusing.

'grats on completing your story! Thanks for writing!

I love a happy ending!

Okies... somehow SO not surprised Naraku ran off after his goal while the fighters were battling his demons. *rolls eyes* You'd think... after all this time... Someone would have guessed he'd do that and not have sent Kagome off alone. With KAEDE for protection? *faceplants* Seriously... I have to wonder what they were thinking. But then... I'm often left wondering what characters are thinking when they do something.

I understand about college getting in the way of things. Hope you continue to write when able as I'd like to see the story complete but don't stress yourself. Studies come first, or it's not worth the money you're putting into it. Keep your priorities straight and we'll just have to hope you have time to spare to update here & there. _

Thanks for writing!

wow good story please update soon ) can't wait to read more