Ughs if it is Edward I will scream.

Oh I wonder what she found.

Haha I loved the interaction between Bella and Charlie.

I liked this so far. I like Bella's life and don't really want Edward to show back up.

The angst here is heart-wrenching! Once more, amazing! And here I said I was a sucker for happy endings...meh..maybe not..lol

I like Charlie too, he's hilarious in his own way, like in the movie when he keeps bringing up the pepper spray, or when he motions there's a halo an his head :)

I think it had a good ending, i was a little confused when she has Edwars again, was that a dream? Or what? But other than that it was a really good story. :) x

Aww, That Was A Truly Sad Ending - For Me -.

I Don't Particularly Like Jacob, I've Always Been A BXE Fan.

But I Liked This Story and It Was Very Sad To Read, Almost As Bad As Chapter Three In New Moon.

I Think Edward Shouldn't Have Been A Dream, That It Should Have Been Reality, But That Is Just My Opinion Of This.

You Could Always Do An Alternative Ending, Where Edward Realised What He Would Do, And He Doesn't Leave, Or That He Does And Bella Cant Live Through That Pain Again, I Dont Know, Im Just Fueling Ideas!

Anyways, Great Read.

I Look Forward To More Of Your Work. And You Have A Great Skill For Someone Who Is German, Writing In English.

Olivia x

Oh my God. That was freaking awesome! I loved it, without the happy ending. It was incredible. Amazing. Very well written. And with a fantastic plot - I always wanted to read a story where Bella finds the stuff Edward hid in NM. So there I have it.

You did a great job with this. I absolutely loved it. And I'm adding it to my Must Read list on my profile. :)

Have a wonderful day!

-Dazzle.

aw

how sweet

I was just thinking about Jacob when Edward made an appearance. It's nice, the fic, she got over him just fine. I liked it.

WOW... I ALMOST CRIED :( THIS WAS WONDERFUL

So sad but well written...

Nice piece.

This story is really really good! If you ever decide to have your stories published, I'll probably buy them, lol!

Wait, I'm confused! One minute she's old and with Jacob, the next she's young and with Edward, and then back to old and Jacob! So, was the Edward part really just a dream? Aw...that's too bad :P