Perfect

I've been binge reading this! Litterally just came to look for sephiroth tifa fics coz I got bored of reading about cloud being emo and broken and being sprry for tifa most of the time. coz she was always just waiting for him to get his shit together. Randomly tried this pairing and oh my god you got me hooked! I love how human sephiroth is. I love your writing style!
But this chapter by far is my favorite. How you made me cry reading this chapter, is pure talent. The description and detail of this. God I hope you have books published coz I wanna read them. You're a great writer!
Not really knowledgable about the technicalities of writing so I cant comment extensively on that. But man do you know how to make your readers engrossed in the story. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY. It felt canon actually! Like hey square, this person can really give something to the table! Maybe the remake could use some of your ideas:) hehehehe.
Reading this 11 years after you first posted this, i dunno if you'll be able to read this comment, but if you do find it, please continue writing. :D
Thank you for brining this story to us ff7 fans :D

Wow amazing just wow

So, I just got finished reading this awesomeness. It is probably my favorite ffvii fic. Such great plot, such great characterization. It was a real pleasure to read. Thank you.:)

No cloud no she will not

Oh yeah she definitely hates you nope not even close she despises and loathes you yup that’s better lol

I just finished reading this story for the first time, it's one of the best FFVII fanfics that I've read. It's got a great plot and even better character development, I would love to see a sequel.

I've read this 2 1/2 times (on my 3rd read), and I love it each time. TBH if this wasn't a fanfic and was canon I think it would fit almost perfectly.

I love the way Cid is written. I laughed through most of this chapter, it was great!

i like lime scenes.

so good

that was good

you should not drink

Hm. In my opinion there are a few too many original antagonists which makes it harder for you to flesh out individual characteristics and makes it harder for me as a reader to get particularly attached to any one of them. Granted they haven't gotten much screen time yet, but it always feels like a data dump when authors have too many original characters and then try to develop them all in one scene like you did at the end of this chapter.

-Zetsumei

It's a little strange Tifa hasn't contacted anyone yet, but otherwise the writing is good and the characters feel on point.

-Zetsumei