So... hot ghost-sex, huh? That's cool. I like that.

EveningBlack here!

OH MY LORD. This made me cry. Lighto was just so heartbroken and Lawli IT'S TOO MUCH WHY IS THIS FIC COMPLETE?!

That was beautifully written. :)

I used to read a lot of your SP stories when I was in that fandom, and I really loved them! Even better to know you write Death Note ones too! 3

Okay...first off, let me apologize for not reviewing this sooner. And let me apologize AGAIN for not READING it sooner. I knew it would be awesome and magnetic and persuasive because you're YOU and...I was not wrong. T_T

However...I do have to complain about something. This is a ONE SHOT? Nooooooo! Dear...this was born to be a multi-chaptered fic. I'm sorry, but it's true. This is only the beginning of something that could be novel-length and full of subplots and twists and turns and...okay, you get it. I want more of this. What do I have to do to get it, hmmmm?

On a side note, the first lines of your Author's Note remind me of our OH MY GOSH, HI! movie. XD

Okay...so moving on to the actual fic...

L is so heartbreaking here. :'( I always feel bad for him and hate Light for what he did to him but...you make him so very sympathetic here. And it's always nice to be able to get into a character's head - especially one like L, who I don't totally fathom.

As for Light, I CAN see evidence of your tweeking him but you're right that it was necessary for the fic to work. And he isn't unbelievable...I think what you tap into here and tweek are actually real feelings that Light possesses, he just wouldn't reveal them, as he does here. (Though maybe if L really did return in spirit form, he would...)

I'm sure you already know that I'm going to applaud your writing of the...adult activities. lol When have I turned LxLight down? But you write them so well together and the passion is strained or false. It's real and it's canon. People who deny their love are missing a few crucial human sense organs.

One thing I want to say before I end: I really do think that Light, after killing L, sat alone somewhere and really FELT his presence. Because Light would miss L that badly, and grief can turn the mind in interesting ways. This fic would be interesting even if L WASN'T back, and was just an exploration of Light's grief and yearning for L's presence back in his life. Even if it wasn't even sexual. (Though obviously I approve of that too. lol)

So...what I want to leave you with is the knowledge that you did a job well here. As always. And that you NEED TO MAKE THIS MULTI-CHAPTERED! DX

Love,

N

I LOVED IT! XD Fantastic! Amazing! Kya~! It was an absolutely brilliant piece! :'D The way you made L feel, & how Light cried was beautifully executed. I just wish you'd continue it! Or if it was JUST meant to be a one-shot, then perhaps you could have ended it a little differently; because that last little goal of L's needs to be fulfilled in my mind! Great job! (OwO)

Just to say, I usually abhor and avoid first-person-narrative with unrivaled passion, but this writing is absolutely brilliant.

It's so incredibly believable and touching.

you got the character of L so well!

you felt the passion and love between the two so perfect. i could see everything playing out and how L sat on the bed

i cried maybe it wass the passiin of both and not being able to be together or maybe it was the sad love song i was listening to. maybe even both.

i havent reviewed any death note story but yours. i am in live with this

Lol, ghost sex. ;)

I like it!

More LxLight please,swetieeeeee!:-)

Very good indeed, as a Kira supporter I find L's blame of the persona a little assuming. I'll not linger however, since he truly seemed to care. It was wonderfully written.

Wow this is really good. It was a very interesting point of view, and made me wonder what would L have been like after death if the author of death note had put that in?

Xoxxo

AWWWWWWW! I cried when I read this. You have a way with words.

I must admit to being curious as to where this is going. I quite liked it, and I'd like to know how L will save Light from himself. Also, ghosts can feel? That was a bit jarring, but it worked out in the end, so I let you off. ;)

oh...my...this was quite heavenly.i love it :)