I absolutely love this! This is definitely a plausible scenario of them to get together.

Although we don't see Wonderbat in the DC Comics today, we'll always have a tomorrow for see Wonderbat, finally released in the comics.

sequel plsssss

Wow.
Pls write moreeee..

I liked

Great story, congratulations! It was not sappy, it was truly beautiful. I loved the drama, angst and the happy ending. And your written style is very good!

I really liked this! I didn't think it was sappy. I could see the characters falling into this kind of relationship and coming out with this kind of a result. I don't see this as merely a pointless romance story but something with substance - the way two people cope with stress and tragedy, and in doing so further complicate their relationship. I think this was well written and the characters had depth to them. Thanks for sharing it!

Oh, that just made me all giddy! Loved it! :D

Aw! That was great! Loved Emotional Diana!

I think that was a good, and somewhat realistic way for them to get together, nice story!

Sappy maybe, but still romantic as far being romantic gets with these two.

Also score one for Alfred.

really lovely...

HawkAngel

Very, very well done.

For your first try that was pretty stellar. I enjoyed reading it and I find your writing style to be thorough, descriptive and passionate. You say that sappiness is not your style but you do it oh so well and it was not too twee. It was a good balance between romance and realism per se as all things should be when one is writing this genre.

I think that you wrote Diana well, she did not seem alien in nature to me at all. That is the trick in writing known characters with a massive amount of history/characterization or back story. Your rendition of Diana was believable, you captured her voice, Bruce's too. Well done and I do hope you write some more! :)

Both the plot and your way of writing we equally spectacular. I love the idea of their bodies moving ahead of their minds - you got that perfectly I think, the release that sex can be.

And as for your technique; it was descriptive when it needed to be, but didn't drag on - and that little bit in the middle with Alfred was inspired, kudos there. Characterisation was very well done, especially Diana's internal battle between knowing she has to get out of it but wanting just a little bit more.

Though - my favourite line: '"Stay."

True to form, it was not a question or a request.'

Bullseye.

Please write more in the future, you have a real talent.