More please .

Please continue. I would love to see how both lands take their coupling. I always did love confrontations. Add another chapter, please?

This was great! It took me a minute to realize that the song was off of Phantom of the Opera, and it fit perfectly! You know, this would make a great plot for a larger story(if ya catch my drift;D) Anywho, kudos to you!

Exquisite.

Your words evoke beauty and rapture. You give an experience that is explicit, erotic and deeply satisfying to my soul. Oh but to spend an hour or two in that enchanted universe with your beautiful version of Sesshomaru.

Thankyou very much.

Awesome story

ach! What are the changes? O_O

Beautiful,, beautiful story. I'd love to know how Kagome was made to be as she is exactly. *headtilts* I don't quite get how she has an 'inner demon' but I'm not certain I am supposed to get it.

It did seem a Little quick how they got together... but I suppose that's the pull of their souls they've felt coming to that spot all these years even if only now meeting in the flesh.

Choice of music/songs was excellent. Might be nice for the uninitiated to be told what songs are used too.

Thanks for writing!

Please please update!

I love how the music of the night matches the story.

Awesome!

Update soon.

There is going to have a sequel? Please exist a sequel please updated soon. XD

First of all it's a good story. I just have one question. What is parthenogenic goddess? I was just confused on the meaning. It's like one in the morning, so my literary skills kind of suck right now. But I hope to read more of your work. Good Luck!

DAMN! THIS STORY IS THE BEST EVER

is there a sequel?

oh my goodness, i loved it! please tell me your writing more!

wow oh my gosh lol it was a great story

That was really good, better than anything I could ever write.