I'm basically in love with your writing style. This one-shot was written so beautifully. Gosh.

For some reason I especially loved Dan's part. I probably shouldn't because I think that his sin is one of the worst, but I still loved it nonetheless.

Oh, goodness. This was lovelylovelylovely multipled by a billion. Yes, a whole billion because I love this piece of art that much.

Firstly, the title. I'm a sucker for a good title. I went to your profile after I looked at HmGirly's Starting Over's review page and I was bored so I thought, 'hey, let's see if there's anything good here.' And this is the only thing that stuck out. It's really a pretty title.

Secondly, I like the whole topic of the 'seven sins' it was... different from a lot of the things I read in this fandom. You get 10/10 for originality! :D

Thirdly, just the writing. Oh wow, it's just really gorgeous. I love it. Write more like this. Please, please, please.

-S.

This was wonderful.

I like how it was darker.

Awesome. XD

The character choices were perfect and the writing was fantastic! Couldn't have done it any more better~

Great job and good luck in the contest!

I do feel sorry for Jamie, most people, including me, assume the harvest goddess is his MOM, and who could blame him for hating people after that?

T_T poor Jamie-Chan...

~Bay

GAWD! That, good madam, was fabulous! Good luck with the contest!

wow. absolutely fantastic

"[G]lasses too big for her fucking head." Oh babe, perfect line. And in Greed, the little punctuation was a very nice effect, in my opinion.

The separate stories for each sin were (also) a nice touch. I love the strong language, and nothing's particularity flowery. It's raw and straight to the point. Completely awesome!

~ASK

One word: GYDFKYVKJH PERFECT! : D

Seriously. I loved it. It was like... sex muffins on a rainy morning while reading the best freaking novel ever and getting the best sleep ever the night before! XD

Need I say more? :D

~Kuruk

Wow... another amazing story from you, Ekoaleko! :) And what a lovely dark feel it has about it. Good luck in the contest! :D

Well done, an interesting story. I really liked the way you gave the characters so much life, Good luck in the competition.

Entry verified (and now that we've gotten THAT out of the way...)

Good Lord. Wow. Every section has its own distinct feel, yet they are innately connected in their core. I don't know what to call it but pure beauty. Beauty, and yet, it's cold, dark, harrowing. Honest.

Faved, verified, and definitely looking forward to more from you, as always. :)

oh, this was really interesting. It makes me feel like I should be writing stuff at least half as good seeing as how I seem to be half as busy as you now. XD; anyways, I liked it :D

Wow. This is really nice. I'd put in my usual 'Entry Verified,' but that's Scarlet's job this time.

Still, this is quite amazing. A little something into each view, and all of it showing a reflection of mankind. Well worth reading, in my opinion.

Oh...I like it. :)

Definatley not what I usually read, with all it's angst and seriousness - but very nice.

Good luck!

KK