Looking forward to the rewrite :)

Please post soon now it's been a year

Oh, my. Their friends are hillarious!

Now, I'm confused. They are vampires or humans? Either way, nice story

Please, Please, Please keep writing this story. I am so addicted to this I feel like I have no life. (it's probably true i spend my life on the computer.) but I loooovvvvveeeeee this story and I really want you to keep updating. this story is amazing and i need to find out what happens. Please?

NO JUST FINISH THIS ONE! LIKE PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS ONE.

YES RE WRITE PWEASE!

no please tweak it if you need to but dont totally throw all this hard work of yours away...i for one would love to see what you do with it

I would love to read a rewrite if your up to it :D

I would love to read a re-write!

If you promise to actually update in a timely fashion, I'll read a re-write. :-P

Haha I never thought about it like that but yes Jasper could make the kid so paranoid that he pisses his pants LoL. And HALO! Love the series in all of its forms. Sadly I only got to play Halo 4 once :( the good side though: in that one night that I played it I beat the campaign and got to level 20 on the multiplayer. I was so tired but it was worth it :]

Man for a second I really thought that the dream was real life in story I was getting scared for a second. Good descriptions in it and the rest of the chapters :]

Wait so she wont EVER find out that they are Vampires? And just wondering if Bella will be coming into this because if I'm correct(and I don't know if I am) this takes place a year before Twilight right?

LOVE this chapter update please update soon thanks D