The ending feel so.. Unfinish(and unsatisfied).. We don't even get the closure of what the heck happend to naruto and sasuke relationship now (this is so not funny and admitingly I am rather mad at the ending *Eyes twitchs*).. I mean I like the plotline and the scene where sasuke and naruto end up lost in eachother it both sweet and funny(since it happen so naturally and always with unsaid and really intense emotion in the air).. Sasuke conflict emotion are also a nice touch although you drawn out the the situation too long and go back and frorth with the character rollercoaster of emotion that end up with me a bit confuse at some point in the story.. You won't believe how much I want to kick sasuke and shove him into naruto arms at around the ending ("Damn moronic unbelievable blind bastard" *fuming*).. And a clever way of describing team taka situation took me two time to realize who the blind mouse is.. But there are still so many unanswer question for me to feel like this is the ending.. For example what happen to team taka why there end up helping sasuke.. How in the world sasuke end up capture with naruto... Who the heck is cat guy and what happen to him and danzo now.. What about naruto is he really ok now.. And sasuke is he still going to take revenge on konoha even when he don't even feel passion for it anymore.. And finally what the heck happen to sasuke and naruto relationship now will it remain bitter forever?!... You really cruel leaving it of right that with out giving any closure to us (at this point i'm not even sure is the ending suppose to be sad or a bittersweet because the ending is not solid enough)

Before I eve nread this story I had to agree with you about how even though I like alot of the stories that I read after a point I had t sit back and think It's great that Sasuke is back and they are together but at the same time I had to wonder but how did they get to this point and I also had to think it couldn't be that easy. So thank you for writing a story that shows what could have happened to get them there with out it being sasuke came back and all was forgiven and they lived happily ever after. I can't wait to read the next installment of this story, Of His Effection.

Wow, I must say, for a non native english speaker, your story is quite hard to read, hehehe, it's a very good exercise... or should I say, you've got a more mature and (awwwn, don't know how to say) "rich" vocabulary and way of writting (don't know if it did make any sense! XD) Well, thanks God, I can read better than speak (write ) so, Im enjoying a lot, until now!

loved it

Wow! Excellent story! Too bad my English is horrible, if not, I would write a more decent comment!

I'll read the sequel!

thanks for fanfiction!

Effection. Once more you make me look up a word! Where do you find these? Anyway, very nice segue-in for the sequel - I can only give you this review and add it to the list because I'm a little busy eating and I totally want to move on to the sequel. Sequel! Yay! _

Okay, so I'm heading out, but fantastic work! *munches on strawberries and cheese* See you next story!

-Kayura

Even though the epilogue is up, I'm still reviewing! Whew, that was sufficiently depressing. And fantastic job with the lemon. You kept it both real and romantic - how the heck?

And though the one kitty left, another has taken her place. His paw's on the computer, trying to get me to take notice of him. *turns to kitty* Go back to sleep.

Anyway, last chapter and then sequel. o_O I should be doing schoolwork. I only have about six papers to start working on... agh. I'll just keep ignoring it. _

-Kayura

I'm guessing you meant calid? Talk about making me learn exotic words... from the 1590s?

Anyway, another great chapter, with plenty of suspense, trust me, and I'm more than eager to find out what's going on with Naruto and Sasuke. _ Gotta see, gotta see! Okay, anyway, I'm off to the next chapter. This one had a lot less typos, so you either paid more attention / had a harder time writing this or double-checked your writing. Either way, very nice.

Next chapter, here I come!

-Kayura

It's dragged. _

Another well-done chapter! I have a kitty who's not happy with me writing this review - she was very much enjoying owning my arm. So this review will be equally short, and it was well-done, and I'm off to the next chapter. Another review for you! *throws it*

-Kayura

Speak no evil, huh? lol. Okie-dokies. I can't say too much, other than it seemed you were getting rushed at the end, either because you were happy it was ending or because you were enjoying the scene, because the worng words were used and I got confused a couple of times, but otherwise it's great and I have to know what happens next, so bye!

-Kayura

I was horrified to see that you don't have that many reviews! Wtf? So here I am, giving you another review, letting you know that your work really is appreciated!

I'm officially on Spring Break, which is why you didn't hear from me all yesterday - yay for traveling across the state. Anyway, this chapter was done well, too. You went back to the nursery rhyme thing, and the only thing with that is that I feel like you can't choose between scene and rhyme.

And you had a couple mess-ups with sentence structuring, where I was left going, "huh?" But it was long (yay!) and interesting (YAY!) and I feel the need to once again let you know that I am, in fact, thrilled to have found your story! _

So yeah, there you go (you need reviews! *throws reviews at you*)! So I hope this helps as a warm fuzzy, and I'm heading to the next chapter!

-Kayura

_ Nice incorporation of the storybook stuff there at the end of this chapter. Ah, it makes me sad, but I'm finally going to have to sleep. ;_; As beautiful as this story is, I need to be awake at some point tomorrow.

Again, it's an awesome chapter, with only a few problems - somthing instead of something, over and over, for example, makes me wonder if it's a typo or if you misspell it thinking that's the correct spelling - but otherwise, once again brilliant. And though Sasuke's acting more OOC, it's like that's happening simply because of the metaphor you show (ice and sunlight), so it isn't OOC so much as "what? Sasuke's... getting a clue? No way!"

_ Kayura

Yatta! And another increase in tension! Yippee!

Okay, this Blinded Mice bit was better. _ Although some lines seemed to exist to pull in the stupid readers - but I think, here on fanfiction, that might've been necessary.

Anyway! Next chapter!

-Kayura

lol. And Tsunade picks up on it. Poor her.

The onlyt hing to say here for constructive criticism is perhaps to fix the Three Blinded Mice portion. If you want to keep it, that's fine; I was going with it for a while. But you might want to shorten it, or else it starts to grate. _

Well, yay for increase in romantic tension, yay for Sasuke's... Sasuke'ness (OMG he's IC! What do I do? It's so rare in fanfictions!), and yay for Naruto's Naruto-ness (he isn't stupid; he isn't emo; he isn't rash to the point of retarded! YAY!)!

-Kayura

Yay! Interesting skip from the final battle, but since we don't know jack about Madara's fighting abilities, I completely understand. (Get out there and fight, Chessmaster!)

Ach, I'm making a lot of typos. I guess I'm tired? Damn. Well, another great chapter, fantastic story so far, Sasuke really IS an emo (stop self-harming, baka!), and I'm really impressed. _

One thing: since Sasuke got the perfect version of the sharingan, isn't his eyesight just fine? Unless he has to have the perfect Sharingan in use to have perfect eyesight? (Explain things satisfactorily, Kishimoto!)

Okay, next chapter!

-Kayura