Peter's reaction was...HILARIOUS

Heh, and I was waiting for Susan's scream "I killed myself!" Oh, well... ;-)

So they can go on these adventures in real life, but once it's a video game they die? It confirms my theory! Video games are harder than real life! LOL that Su won!

-Dyslexic Nerd

H-I-L-A-R-I-O-U-S. Congrats and see you on TLC!

I really love this story. I have read this story several times. I couldn't remeber if I reviewed or not.

I absolutely ADORE that story! To bad it was one-shot...

What a fun idea! I loved the idea that Susan was the one to win the game. I think they were all modernised nicely, without grating too much (as some modernisations tend to do). Nice work!

ROFL! Couldn't help laughing out loud at this. It's great! It is SO going on my faves list!

oh. my. god. that was hilarious~~ peters reaction at "killing" lucy was quite hilarious~ and then susan was the only one who beat the game when she was supposed to be the "gentle" one...

amazing oneshot~

love always

hisanachan

Ahahahahahaha. This is awesome. And while the timeline is a little screwed up, who cares? This is great. I loved how they kept accidentaly killing each other and their reactions to it. Especially the first time with Lucy killing Edmund. :) Merry Christmas!

aww...this is so cute... i loved the part with peter where he thought of himself as a terrible big brother... this made ma laugh so much... i love this!

Hee, hee. That's funny. I always find it laughable when people get so worked up over computer games in real life, and to see the Pevensies doing so in a story...I was laughing all the way through! Well done!

~Lady Jill

that was very funny! sounds like a fun video game. peter got so worked up over a silly game! but it made me laugh a lot. another hilarious story!

That was Fun! The Cat Name!lol.

Oh that was so funny :) That's a true compliment as I normally can't stand silly fics. I was laughing all the way through.