| Reviews for Her name is May Maple |
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  ethan chapter 3 . 3/30/2019 that was the best thing i ever read i am going to read it again |
 348joey chapter 1 . 3/16/2019 "Kumquat Island"? That's a very… unfortunate name given the setting. I'm sure it's completely innocent, but unfortunate implications happen. Not kissing in a six year relationship? No. These are teenagers. Attractive teenagers. With hormones. That's not going to happen. "Incapacitated", not "capacitated". How did your spell check miss that? No, May, you do not 'shrug off' your boyfriend being kidnapped. I think this is the only story I've read where the protagonist's friends' advice actually works. "Were they ready for such a thing when they haven't even kissed yet?" No! No, they are not! Hate to break it to you, May, but drunk people can't give consent. Anticlimactic, but I just noticed that this is a dead account anyway, so my criticism was wasted. Oh well. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/13/2018 I just read all three chapters. Perfect pacing! I'm playing through Pokémon emerald right now and this story fits so well. |
| Anomynus chapter 3 . 7/3/2018 Well, shit. Th-th-th-th-that’s all, folks! Join in next time with May and Brendan to find that they are slowly falling into the deep, dark, and treacherous pit of parenthood! |
| Anonymouse chapter 3 . 11/26/2017 The last line killed me. XD |
| Slap Happy God chapter 1 . 4/25/2017 What have I stumbled across? |
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 4/21/2017 Dun Dun Dun. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/5/2017 WHOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAHHHHHH |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/24/2017 Brendan wears a hat his hair is brown! The hat is white duuuuuuuhhh! He doesn't have white hair stupid! Moron! And that's it :) Soz for shouting it was aggrievating. Bye peace! |
| AnonymousAccount1001 chapter 3 . 12/26/2016 Wes and Rui in this fic. You may be my friend now. |
| oops chapter 3 . 11/28/2016 "protection?" wow he is like 18 and has never heard of a condom wow |
| GUY chapter 1 . 11/27/2016 HE DOESNT HAVE WHITE HAIR ITS A FRICKIN HAT |
| Brenmayforever20 chapter 3 . 11/14/2016 long chapters, good plot, great graphics, i say this is a great story. It was also good how you ended it dramatically. Great job. I give this a A plus |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/19/2016 Jesus loves you and thinks you're amazing and wants to forgive you, all you have to do is ask and repent out loud please please please please please please please please don't waste your blessings You're amazing and JESUS WANTS SO BADLY TO FORGIVE YOU Please let him Jesus will come into your life and help you with WHATEVER you need help with if you ASK and REPENT OUT LOUD |
| Guest chapter 3 . 8/11/2016 I liked that you used proper euphemism and humor along the story and the moment of intimacy of my favorite shipping was very mind blowing! Thanks for the entertainment! |
