Such a shame you didn't carry on with this. Its a brilliant story and was just becoming awesome

I enjoyed this. I hope you finish it. Great concept and well-written!

Hope you are still around to finish this!

This was very good... Nicely written...

Keep writing of Jack and Kate please:)

I enjoyed this AU Jate story thank you:)

It is a very good story so far, Please continue !

I'm so sad you disconnected this story. You had a really good thing going. I do hope that you'll resume it at some point.

Wow this is a great story. Pity that it's not continued. I would love to read what happened next in this fic.

i don't know if you're still writing this (i assume not since the last update was months ago) but i just wanted to let you know how much i enjoyed reading it. i came across it earlier today and couldn't stop reading. it has a really interesting plot, and the way in which you have jack and kate existing in this world is quite fascinating.

Not sure if you're still writing...it's been about 5 months since your last update. I really hope you are though because I love this story! Very well written and a great plot. Love the tie-in of all of the characters. Hope I get to read another chapter!

offfttt I hope you get back to this sometime ... especially now that Juliet's in the picture :333 Love this story 3

Yes, I found this again! Thank you so much for updating, otherwise I never would have. I love AU Jate fics, and yours is one of the best, in my opinion. I love seeing Kate on the right side of the law. And Christian would totally be involved with the mob; it just suits his personality so well. All the sexual tension is fabulous. Any chance of an update soon?

I love this storyy ,, please update soon (: x

Wow! Just wow! I LOVE this it is amazingly written and all the characters are so perfectly done. Please update again as soon as you can. :) I wanna know what happens next. :)