Goodness. If only you could see the great deal of blushing and silent screaming I did while reading this! I was a tad confused at first as to why it was suddenly alright to make out on the way to the Ready Room, but bravo! You pulled it off excellently! I absolutely love this story!

-WeddingBelle

Well, this story succinctly captures the humiliation inherent in the experience of desire. Brutal!

Holy Cow! My eyes about popped out of my head...hell, they did pop out of my head when I read Chakotay had been dreaming and had...well... you know! lol Nicely written...lol.

Wow, very hot!

Of course that made me wonder if he makes noises in his sleep? :-D

So nice to see that Chakotay's overly active imagination paid off! Well done!

CHUCKLES! Pull yourself together, don't fantasize while you're on duty! ;)

Well that was both lovely and torturous, the very best kind of story. I'm still finding myself utterly amused at Commander Chakotay's predicament, even though my heart goes out to him. Such a sweet man, who can blame him for letting his thoughts escape control? I certainly can't, Kathryn Janeway is far too perfect for anyone to overlook.

A nice evening's read, thanks for sharing that

*grins like a clydesdale's horseshoe & hopes for some nice J/C dreams*

Lol. I was lmao at what the bridge-crew's faces would have been like.

Wow! I love it! Absolutely perfect! I really enjoyed it!

Oh my god, that was the biggest tease I've ever read. Great descriptions, but what a rude awakening! Hehe, poor Chakotay!

This is very clever: I would never have thougt of using Critical Care this way. Poor Chakotay, that would be embarrassing! Still, it finally got the captain's engine going, so that has to count for something;)

Good work, as always.

It was quite funny. Chakotay is a good target for teasing... :)

Oh god, Chakotay must have been so embarrassed! And Tom's one-liner was awesome. So true. :)