WOW, never really expected a song fic here in "Tagalog" though.

You did quite a good job translating since in your profile it says your from Australia.

And its Filipino not filapino.

But it was quite a nice fic though.

So you got this from Sarah Geronimo... it's okay... I'm Filipino anyway... hahaha

Anyways, "Kung ako na lang sana" is "If I were the one" in English... but I understand that you are improving in your grammar. It's been a long time since I've seen a Filipino review my stories.

Oh, I've updated my story, Winner Takes Ash. Chapter 10 to 14 focus primarily on Advanceshipping! Don't miss this opportunity!

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1) Ash starts having an interest in girls, yet he only sees May as a friend. Sad.

2) I see some errors.

a) Filipino, not Filapino.

b) "Ewan kung bakit ba I don’t knowyour still not wondering"

3) "Parang bale wala ang puso ko my heart is useless to you" Try 'nothing'. It sounds better than 'useless'.

4) Ang kahulugan ng, "Kung ako na lang sana ang iyong minahal," ay, "If I was the one you loved," am I right?

If so, then why is the meaning of, "Kung ako na lang sana," also, "If I was the one you loved," if the phrase, "ang iyong minahal," is absent (minahal, which means 'loved' or 'loved one')?

My Tagalog/Filipino skills may suck, but I still know a few things... I still appreciate the effort you put into translating this OPM of Sarah Geronimo.

You did a very nice job with this one Midnight. There aren't all that many song-fics that impress me but this one did it. The song fit perfectly into what you wrote, even if it was a bit sad to read. But in the end at least it was May that Ash went to after the break up. Nothing in life is set in stone, change is always occurring and sometimes the best things in life are hidden in the worst events.

I'll say it again, you did a great job with this one. Keep 'em coming!

You make the most sad song-fics... (sniff) sorry I need a tissue... that was beautiful...

Peace. (blows into tissue)