This was such a great story, wish you would/could wwrite a sequel.

loved it! I really enjoyed your pace of writing! i hope to see more of these cuz i LOVE this pairing(even though its kinda esoteric to VK fans) keep up the great work!:)

Confused

Confused

Mother of...

That's amazing.

I love the conversation btw them!

Why? Because. Who are you? No one. Lols:D

Wiser it was longer!

I really like. It's very random and sincere.

Oh... so cute. I actually can't remember at the moment who Yori was. Yuki's friend, I think?

Mmm, strong emotions, liked that, and I liked that he did know her name after all, that was a really nice evocative touch.

Solid 3

aww that is so sweet :)

Sabrina-chan xoxo

That was sweet! :)

Short but sweet! Very nice! XD

I LOVE you word choice; it's so precise and to the point! Not much has actually happened in your story's plot but it feels like it carries so much more than the written words. Well done! ;D

Wah, I love it.

You portrayed the characters so well.

And the content is so sweet.

This is one of the few first person point of view fan fiction I've read that I really like. I think you managed to capture the essence of both characters in such a delicate situation which a less capable writer would have botched.

very sweet.