well, it's probably too late to review this story, seeing that the last update was almost two years ago, but I have to say that it is excellent.. very original, fluffy and much better than canon.

you can't be done. you realy need to finish this story. it's great.

E! I'm so glad the main suspense was resolved in this chapter, otherwise I'd be going crazy. But there still seems to be room for continuation...

Um, wow, you totally broke me. Because I really wanted to see the actual lets get married conversation, and you had it, and it was even better than I expected. I loved Tony's reasoning of because we're best friends.

Okay, I really didn't intend to review every chapter of this. Moving on!

oh, that chapter ends so brutally...but everything is gorgeous, lovely character interaction...

How cute is this story? SO CUTE. The library description through movies was so good! As was Eli David's reflection. And the banter! Ninja gods! Laundry security! Tony tricking her into marriage by being pregnant. I love that you gave Ziva a real sense of humor! I love how they're settling in despite themselves, and they're uncomfortable but they're also strangely comofortable at the same time. Okay, I'm gonna finish reading, but I knew I'd forget some awesome things if I didn't review right now.

This is amazing! I love it! I'm also a tad bit confused- is every chapter a new year? I think it is with the whole "something went wrong in the last eight years" thing with Tony and Gibbs. Please Update soon!

Truly, my favorite aspect of this story was how well you portrayed emotions. It's also a story I didn't find to be OOC at all, especially concerning Ziva. The idea of Tony putting layers of security between her and the laundry cracked me up far more than I am willing to admit. It's the type of thing they would do, in my opinion, were they in a situation like this. A wonderful job with this. Thank you for sharing.

and the drama that was brewing...boiled.

ouchie, poor Tiva... :(

Your writing is smooth. I greatly enjoy it )

Lovely.

Well written.

am i feeling drama boil underneath all this wonderful and sweet snapshots? )

all the characters seem in perfect character. thank you.

they fight to make up to make out ;)

Harsh words exchanged at the beginning.

I love Abby :D

aww, how cute )

You kept their bickering true to their characters! Loved it.

how interesting...