pleasepleaseplease don't abandon this here! it is sooooo unbelievably hard to find a good, long, realistic leon/kairi, and your story has it all!

This is so AMAZING! I can't wait for more!

this is a really great story! i hope you update soon! ;D

I can't believe I've not reviewed this yet! (and yet I find myself saying this a lot...)

Your writing is AMAZING and I lovelovelove stories about Kairi rediscovering her roots-type thing. You're an amazing writer and have taken this in directions that I'm amazingly looking forward to reading. And, well, I frankly love your Leon.

I wish I could say something constructive... But really, just good job, keep it up!

...i think i love you :)

lol don't think i'm freaky it's just because I absolutely ADORE SquallKairi and to have a well-written, realistic, long-chaptered SquallKairi (in what looks to be a romantic relationsip) is very exciting!

I will now go read the next chapter but please update soon :)

Well this is an interesting tale.

I like the way it's written, it's very dream like. I enjoyed just relaxing as the proses melted into my mind. It jarred out a bit in the middle of chapter 2, but got back into the flow. I'm glad I just got this from a recommendation by another person though, not knowing of the pairing and just clicking the link. It produced a much more pleasant surprise as I picked up the hints.

Oh, I am so very intrigued. The fact that Kairi's past in Hollow Bastion was never quite explained always bothered me in KHI. And as Riku said, it's always good to see her go on her own journey. I'll definitely be reading more. :)

Oh, I love it! Great job on this one!

I like how you describe the story of the life first before getting into anything serious. Although I would like to know how the story would unfold a little faster. But it's your style, so stick with it!

By the way, have you ever seeing something called "Dead Fantasy"? In the second installment, he added Kairi as one of the characters fighting, and she's pretty kickass in it! It's a great insight on how Kairi might fight. She's frickin' sweet. And it's all 3D so it looks like it's in the GAME.

Anyways, the Leon x Kairi moments in here are painfully slow, but realistic, so I'm not complaining. I just hope that Kairi opens up more towards the other characters. I'd like to see her interactions with the other characters more instead of just her thoughts. IT seems she avoids conversation, unless you're not writing it. I'd like to see them!

And I frickin' LOVE Yuffie. I swear I do. Haha, "Age gap? Who cares!" I swear, that's total truth being spoken! xD

Great job! I love the story! Can't wait for more! Keep on doing what you do best!

Adios!

Lovely, lovely story. I really enjoy how you're writting this and I am shocked you don't have more reviews. I always wondered if Kairi knew the people who said they lived there or vice versa. Very good! .

woha thats really a great story i REALLY loved it so don,t stop! update soon please

LeonxKairi is a little unusual, but you make it work.

Did you delete "Upside Down Omega"? I really liked it...

Great story! I was hooked! I love how you portrayed everything, so realistic, so ... just realistic! x3

The way the characters interacted, and how Kairi observes everything. It's very original, very real, and I can totally see it happening!

I can't wait till you update, and you're a GREAT writer! I'll be checking out more of your work!

Keep writing, yo, even if you don't write into this story.

All and all, I think you've done enough for a days work, yo. x3

Adios, and keep on doing what you do best!

Absolutely stunning.

Leon/Kairi is an odd pairing of mine, and I love this story already. Update soon please!