If Harry's had four birthday parties with Dumbledore and co., than Peter was in hiding for 4 years, and Harry should be five.

very first line.. Albus "new 15 uses for dragons blood -3 were dangerous"

So, reading what is written there:

* Albus "new" something. That's better than having him "old" it, I guess. Wish the author "knew" better!

* fifteen uses of dragons blood, negative three of them were dangerous? Rilly?
hint: never use that symbol before a number unless you intent the number to be a negative.

* dragons, or dragon's? Or maybe dragons' ? Which one did you intend, they have differing meanings.

I suspect that if this fic continues like this, the storyline will get drowned by the misconceptions caused by bad spelling and grammar.

Acabas de romperme el corazón estaba tan emocionada con la historia que al leer la nota m mataste

Brilliant even unfinished. I loved the way they all became a family. You rock! :D

This is such a sweet story. I will follow just in case you ever change your mind.

I know you’re no longer writing the story, but I wanted to say thank you so much it’s such a beautiful story I loved every chapter :)

Strep throat can lead to rheumatic fever, are you setting that up? they are both too young to have any likely heart defect because small children curl up and rest when tired rather than pushing themselves and Petunia and Vernon aren't going to be working Harry like a house elf.

I'm sorry to see this end before it was done. Thank you for keeping it up, and thank you for sharing it. I hope someone picks it up. Good luck with whatever you write next!

Hey! I really liked your story. I'd like to see it continued. If this story has been adopted, will you please tell me where I might find the continuation?
Thanks

your timeline is a bit wrong, harry was born in july, 1980 and lost his parents the year after. for harry to have his 5th birthday on chptr 15 the year in this chptr should at least be 1986

What is the point of time travel if you use bs author fiat not to change anything?

I rather wear my daily disposable contacts

Come on..he can't give sirius a trial? What did sirius do to deserve 12 yrs in askaban for 'fate' to decide that he can't have a trial?

Oh how i love this story! It's so original since usual time-travel Fanfucs have Harry or Hermione going back in time/ This is the first Fanfic i've read with Dumbledore going back in time. So good job you wrote a pretty good story!

This story is very well written and I have very little complaints on how it turned out. I was wondering if anyone ever picked this story up? However, I doubt it's as well written as yours is, so kudos to you.