Reviews for Into the Night
Guest chapter 23 . 3/12/2018
Such a great book I LOVED it
SharonWillow chapter 10 . 9/23/2013
You wrote car in this chapter. The first mass produced car wasn't until the early 1900's. I wasn't sure if you meant to write that. I know sometimes I subconsciously put words in my story's so I was being friendly and letting you know.

I really enjoy your story!It's very inventive.
SharonWillow chapter 4 . 9/23/2013
This is a great story. You have a gift with words. Just a little note you wrote car instead of carriage in this chapter. I only say this because if you change that it will be perfect. )
dbpbatm chapter 23 . 5/13/2013
Fun read! Thank you for sharing this.
dbpbatm chapter 2 . 5/13/2013
Interesting combination of time period and vampires!
Motherof8 chapter 23 . 5/1/2013
Thanks for a good story
BellsyBoo chapter 23 . 3/24/2013
Wow! This story was amazing! It was really sad though, but sweet revenge!
LeeseeQ chapter 16 . 9/16/2012
I have loved the story so far, and your writing is excellent, I've enjoyed many of your stories, but I'm not into the revenge and violence thing. I generally love the simple goodness in Edward and Bella and I don't really like to think of them this way, it kind of gives my heart a toothache or something... so for this story, here's where we part ways. Good luck :)
laceyndom chapter 23 . 2/9/2011
I was wondering if alice and the others were showing up but great story without them
MistressSandman chapter 9 . 5/13/2010
Did they rape Bella or beat and touch her inappropriately? I am curious because in the next chapter she says she is a ruined woman but in this chapter I did not read of her being violated in that way...still it is vague in certain areas so I am uncertain...I am aware this must seem like a trivial question (when it comes to the big picture of the story) but I am one of those people who wants every little fact in order in my mind and I go nuts when I do not know them...I mean if you do not have the time or the inclination to tell me I will understand completely, but I cannot help but ask...

As for a review? This chapter like the rest of the story was wonderful-I especially adored the end. This story was told with a certain eloquence that I loved!
siruisblack18 chapter 23 . 5/12/2010
loved this!
AliceCullen'sBFF chapter 23 . 4/4/2010
i think this is the sweetest non-lemon story i've read
AliceCullen'sBFF chapter 20 . 4/4/2010
I thought Edward's reaction to Bella holding his hand were too funny
AliceCullen'sBFF chapter 14 . 4/3/2010
Aw. That was such a sweet chapter
AliceCullen'sBFF chapter 5 . 4/3/2010
Next chapter is going to be so good, Not that this one wasn't
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