hm.

IF Alanna ever had the chance/wish to write poetry, I doubt highly it'd be like that...not trying to be critical.

In spite of that, i think it was quite a good poem. *shakes LadyStar1's hand* well done

Alex.. died? Which book?

Ohhh, sad. Reminds me that Alex was a good friend. Nice job with the poem, and brownie points for the fact that it rhymes, too.

*cries* That's so sweet and sad! I loved it, partly because I loved Alex and didn't want him to die. ;; I love it, although I'm not usually too hot on poems. But...there's always a time to start, right? *

Oh my god! That was great! That was your first peom? That was too cool.

Very good prose...though does it strike you as a little OOC? I am experienced in this area and I know that many people do OOC fics and poetry as part of their plot. I've heard it all. But Alanna killed Alex, yet he haunts her? It confuses me, but like I said it was sill enjoyable.

This is really good. You are a good poet!

Too true. All the more reason she killed Duke Roger.

That was good. Very good. Am I the first to review? No? Yes? Yes, I think I am. Cool. You should write more poetry. :-)