WOW! I like yours better! Thank you so very much!

This was one of the best stories I have read you captured the characters perfectly and the whump was great too!

Love love love this story! Definitely better than the original episode. Thank you for this!

I liked the warm cuddly ending.

Wow! This was one of my favourite episodes, really liked getting to see an evil John Sheppard lol
And you made it even better by adding that extra bit of whump that you do so well. I was kinda disappointed that there wasn't more whump in the episode, I did think Sheppard was going to get shot at that bit so I'm very happy with how you changed it. Awesome!

You made the best part of that episode even better!

I love this idea and how that shot having found it's mark changes the whole slant of the events after. That you've kept everything surrounding the changes, plus adding a missing part where Rodney realises what moved the entity on from him, increases the effect of the changes made. I like the reference to the origin of the clown because I've always rather thought the clown's presence was John's fault, even if it is only there because Rodney knows that he hates them. A great and thoroughly enjoyable story!

Not even safe on Atlantis...

Poor darlin'

and his XO shot him...

Awesome, gorgeous version of the latter half of that ep! And the warm fuzzies at the end were fantastic - a perfect mix of hurt and comfort. Thanks, made for a very enjoyable lunchhour reading through this. :D

Can't help but feel sorry for Lorne though, he and John need some quality time after this methinks.

nice story.

i love all of your stories! and this one is no exception. great team stuff! and even better shep wump:) awesome job!

Very good.

Great fanfiction:)

Great story. I wish that was what happened in the show.

Loved it.

What a great team ending. All I can say is delicious.