Hey there!

So I finally hunkered down this winter furlough and gave this a readthrough front to back, all in one sitting. It’s been quite a while since you finished but I told myself I didn’t want to review until I really gave the whole thing a once-over.

There’s so much history behind this story. It was the third fanfic I ever read, and the story that pulled me into this strange and magical world. I know in the TC fandom this story also singlehandedly established the “coma trope” for quite a number of other writers, myself included. Reading through the story this time brought back waves of memories, from the time I was on a road trip through Utah and thought Derek died (instead of Cybil), to getting your incremental updates through college, to just this past year coming back from a retreat and reading the final epilogue. It was longer than any of us thought, even you, I think.

It was cool to see the evolution in your writing and how you’ve matured both in style and content. From your later and refurbished chapters, your ability to write more medically accurate scenes and capture deeper nuances of pain, trauma, and comfort really stand out. I’ve no doubt your life with its ups and downs as well as your profession have grown you, and it shows. It’s my favorite part of this story.

Now highlights! During the serial run, I remember the chapter with Cybil’s funeral was a real slap in the face when I first read it, and it still was today. Derek waking up, still epic. Back then it was the Derek and Angie show for me. But this time around, I think I finally ended up enjoying the subplots for the other characters—Tyler and Leslie supporting each other (the scene where they end up swapping bedrooms is probably my favorite in the whole piece, so cute), Victor confronting his own lies, Sidney bearing the burden of becoming a leader—because of how deep and realistic they are. The true hostages, as it turns out, are the deep pains and insecurities each character grapples with, which is why 2/3rds of the story is devoted to the aftermath. In my mind it overcomes some of the plotholes/non-realistic parts and allows me to stay immersed in the story.

In short, it was worth the wait. This is your magnum opus, and I’m proud of you!

PS: Dang reading this reminded me that iPods exist. Geez, we thought that a story set in 2018 wouldn’t have AIDS or cancer, but there would still be iPods! :D

Cor... I don't know what to say...

I mean I've probably grown up with this story, Just as much as you I guess... So I almost can't believe this is the Last review for this story I'm posting on here and on FF. Like wow... :XD:

Of course It was brilliant.

I felt It definitely brought the closure it needed with Cybil. The conversation was deep and thought provoking as well as showing the emotion that you have brought through this story. It's gonna take time, But it's that they'll be able to carry on. Very Nicely done.

Why, oh why, am I not surprised you put a marriage proposal in there!? :D In all seriousness, Given how dramatic the story's been, It's the sort of Sweetness that a story needs to stop it turning into a S***ty Soap opera - Not that the story felt like that all, But it brought a really nice happy feeling to it for me. Though I did chuckle because I saw that coming a mile off, With what Del-Boy was implying, talking about his quads, And Angie not suspecting a thing. I laughed again when The tables turned when He was oblivious that she wanted to... Um... Er... *Finger snap* Dance Horizontally... Yeah that's a tasteful away of putting it. ;) And In all honesty I didn't she was being blunt at all... No, seriously. :D But I really enjoyed those parts as well, Because As I said, It had the feel good part to end a story that I find satisfying.

And I also Liked how Angie Thanked Tyler. If they ever do bring out stories, or another game, I hope they portray him, like you do. A loveable goof, With a shady past, But as loyal pal and an all round Good (And Hilarious) egg.

... Even Though I've kept up with the story all these years, I can't imagine how tasking, and Time consuming it's been for you. But I sincerely hope you're proud of the story, Because it's been terrific keeping up with it. And of course one of the best stories I've read on these sites. I can't thank you enough for finishing it. Once again, Well done, old pal. And Thanks for posting.

Dan F

I realized as I was reading your last chapter that I didn't remember reading this. I started at the beginning and it took three days to finish and staying up until eleven at night. I am proud to say I have finished this and as much as I know you don't wanna hear it I think it should have a sequel. this was just an amazing story that could keep going on so I will ask for a sequel even though I know it most likely won't happen. keep writing because you are amazing at it. I have also found some of your other works online so you will hear from me again.

OMG I love this so so much. I love your style and the wording. I said I would wait on another story and I sure enough came back to finish this out. you said you have another account what is that one?

TCGeek, the world's greatest cliffhanger writer!

Well this is part one *I guess I just must have thought the episode before this was the final* BUT I love it. I say it EVERYTIME but when I read your new chapters and I compare it to the prologue and beginning chapters of the series and even other FF's I can really tell your growth in the medical industry and as a human being. I'm so proud of you! Your writing has gotten longer and longer which is another amazing thing. From late 2008 to 2018 here we are loving Hostage more and more. There's a true art that comes with your writing capabilities and I hope one day after my college years that I can even match your skills. I set my eyes high on you and someday I will do just that. Until then! Thank you for the emotional heartwarming and touching part one of the Epilogue of Hostage!

Once again, I can't thank you enough for taking us on such a ride over the years with this story. You've portrayed every emotion, from action, Shock and Sadness, To Heart Warming, Warmth and Happiness. Much obliged for your work, as usual my friend. And I eagerly await the epilogue.

Dan F

I liked both chapters very much. Especially since you brought in the comedy (I love your Leslie!) in a lovely way.

I suppose I think Derek was a touch too abrasive to not realise that Angie might take his attitude very badly. I think Derek is a chronic people pleaser so even in a situation as dire as this he'd attempt to put a brace face of, and fail of course!

However you captured his inner workings just perfectly, especially his feelings about getting back to work and survivors guilt.

And so the series comes to a sad but sweet end. As always your writing skills have woken me up at 2 AM just to read the updates and I'm more than glad I did. Thank you for this incredible story.

People like to think that readers are the most valuable thing to what they write but... I think to anyone who's read this, they would agree that reading Hostage has changed lives. It's made people like myself think and feel inspired as well as rejuvenated. Your stories and your writing style just bring out emotion and inspiration from everyone and that's something you should know. At the conclusion of one of my favorite stories of my favorite author, I come to grips with just how big of an impact you make. Thank you. Thank you for Hostage. Thank you for you.

I look forward to what comes next from our brilliant author.

amazing! truly freaking amazing! i don't know how you write such long chapters but you're SO incredible at writing! This is so coolTCGeek is back! I never thought this day would come but god am I beyond happy you update! you're the reason I started an account on this site! I'm beyond ecstatic with this story and I CAN'T wait for the ending! Phenomenal job, TCGeek! Welcome back from the bottom of all of our hearts!

You're back holy shizzle you're back! I thought I'd never see the day

Anyways, while I'm a new fan around (okay not really, just a silent reader until I got an account) I just want to say that your writing hasn't changed a bit and it's still amazing.

Your use of metaphors and your personification techniques are still sharp, and I definitely got 'graphic novel feels' from it. The picture you paint on the fic is very interesting and also very clear, if you get what I mean. It's also worth noting that your writing has a good balance of both narration and dialogue, and it flows smoothly.

Also, is this the end of this story? Please tell me it's not.

Bye!

First off I am beyond happy that you've updated. I honestly wasn't sure you would and so I was properly shocked when I saw the update!

Secondly; great chapter. Their reactions to Robert's suicide was skilfully done and after what they'd been through it really would be so emotionally draining.

My highlights were Victor and Leslie's relationship. It's nice to see two adults emotionally supporting each other without it being romantic or a 'best friend' situation.
Then, of course, Derick's reaction to Angie's actions.

Because even if you were head over heels for someone hearing them give up their life just for you would be so *heavy*. After all he's been through you would start to doubt your own name let alone something as elusive or as intangible as love.

All and all this is probably your best written chapter yet. Well done.

YOU'RE BACK!

Oh my god.

Man I sworn that this fic was abandoned.. But I'm so glad this is back!

Wonderful chapter as always!

I love how descriptive you are oh my word. I'm so happy to hear working is going well for you and while I've missed your Fanfictions for years now, it's awesome to know you've been living life. I don't know if your return is brief or permanent but whichever I respect. I can't wait for the next chapter of the greatest Trauma Center FF and the greatest TC Writer ever!

TCGEEK UPDATED!? Welcome back! We missed you so much oh my god! anyways, good chapter and I hope to see more soon!