horrendously bad. I don't even have the mental coordination to organise my thoughts so that I can begin telling you all the many many reasons why this is so awful that are going through my mind right now.

the story was great...fascinating characters ans events!

Wow I really enjoyed that! Thank you for an awsome story!

Its a good story but however i felt annoyed reading it as there are so many mistakes, for instance the unforgivables can't be stopped by finate incantatem let alone the killing curse. I shall ignore the slytherin thing. And one other thing is that i found the story rather repetitive as grindlewald was always on the floor and your use of spells and imagination for creation of spells got very weak towards the end, you may also want to think about having the relationship between the too more visible as there is a lot of history...

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sorry to be over analytical but albuss sisyers name is ariana and also for two great wizards they wouldnt need to use spells like stupefy or crucio. they use silent spells iyoud probably see gridewald use something like fiendfyre but it was interesting nonetheless

*grins* nice...although I think I like the one about Regulus better, but that's just my obsession with all things Black

I do like the clue that Grindelwald gave Voldemort about the Elder Wand, though..*laughs* and if Riddle couldn't figure it out, then he wasn't as cunning as he'd like to think he was

Good. I like the story. I was skimming the archives to see if anybody wrote a story on the 'legendary duel' between Dumbledore and Grindelwald.

I have to be honest, and say the duel wasn't so legendary though. The fight in the Department of Mysteries in HP 5 was better. Still, it was an interesting duel. Interesting story, and a passing grade,

8/10

Nice story! I loved it...didn't you used to have three fanfics on here?

Gellert Grundewald wasn't a Slytherin.

Durmstrang didn't have Gryffindor, Hufflepuff, Ravenclaw, and Slytherin, because those houses were named after Hogwarts's founders.

Otherwise, this was a very good story.

So it WAS Dumbledore. That's really sad. Ah, well. Funny pen name, by the way. Dumbledore lived in the Burrow? The Burrow's in Godric's Hollow? And how did Dumbledore stop the AK?

I liked it. The battle scene was very quick written.

i liked it and i liked especially how you made gellert feel remorse in the end, it was probably something voldemort never could do. great story!

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Aw, I want to find out more of what happens in the after life. This one's definately a keeper.

AW! -dies happy-

Aw man, now I really REALLY wanna draw ficart for you! :D I adored this piece...what a beautiful fic x3 Would you care to continue writing on their afterlife experiences? There's so much potential for this marvelous gem of a fic...I thoroughly enjoyed reading these three chapters!

Gellert keeping Albus's chocolate from had me in tears :D That's just so sweet...