luv this story!

OH WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW

that story was fantastic

im definately reading the sequel!

hey couldn't be bothered logging in! WOW that was fantastic! can't believe it. u should hav yassen and alex talk and stuff WOW

wow that sounds so much like my lunch table we sit around and are like what are you doing this weekend?" "i don't know how 'bout you guys come over to my house?" 'and do what?" 'We could get michelle to talk swedish for us." Bottle of wqater flies across table "Shut up, alex,i don't want to talk swedish?" "why not?" "Just cause" "ok have you water bottle back." water bottles flies opposite direction across table. "Do you guys know what a dork is?" "yes, isaac, you've only tole us five times." fork flies across table. it's pretty awesome actually, normally it's just a couple of us but somedays like everyone comes and sits with us, because apparently we don't care what everyone else thinks. sorry that was so long you story just reminded me of that.

You just HAD to end it with a cliffhanger, didn't you?

You need to write a sequel now. I want to be Ari shes best friends with Alex and shes the daughter of Yassen.

reminds me of the Princess Bride

This is good, but why does Yassen think of Alex as 'little brat?' He LURRVES Alex. Alex is his besty.

dah, dah, dah! Great story!

yeah it is a great story, worthy of a sequel I doubt you will have any problems writing it, and don't worry about it being as good as the first. With the writing skills you have shown I'm sure you will have no problems.

Uh I'm horrible with names. And the teachers wouldn't have to kill me for knowing their plan if they gave me C's, my mom would do that for me!

Btw, have you ever heard of HOL? It's this cool virtual Hogwarts thing. .uk

yes it was my quote look at my an in my story.

i love how u ended it. u should keep it that way to keep people wandering. and my last review was slow sory about that. it is now useless so dont read it.

u no wat u should do? i guess not b/c u cant read minds

u should make yassin be on a mission and not really be aris dad...that would be cool, but i dont think u will do that

i think u should make a sequel

your right. ill just leave your hands and face. *starts shooting sporks w/ spork gun*

that was awesome! i loved how yassin became the good/bad guy. it was cool. even though he killed all thoses people i still LOVE him!

u should have let ari die (stabs her! ok ill stop playing w/ my dolls now)

oh and this in MY quote stealler:

I hate when people make cliffies, but I love making them myself

GIVE ME MY CREDIT WHEN ITS DESERVED (and its not often i will tell u that) lol

i LOVE u