OHMYGOD
It was so 're brilliant

O_O I love it! Write more?

holy crap.

great job.

one word-awesome...and impressive

“Let’s begin with my name.”

There is a slight hesitation.

“Master.”

“Ah, yes. I missed that.”

lol Really, what more can I say? It's *AWESOME*

Fantastic! I love it!

is it wrong that I loved this? It's disturbing on so many levels, and yet the master and the Doctor just... works!

gd fic

Oh. Wow. Poor Doctor... I've found so few other people who write this pairing, so for that I salute you! The story is great but disturbing, I can really see it happening because the Master is so incredibly unfeeling, yet there's so much chemistry between them! This is excellent, please continue!

:O. One word: *wow*...

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Beautiful.

*pokes name* This is... just too wonderful for words..

Oh.

What more can I say? Loved it. Really loved it. I especially thought the line “I offer you this: You stop pouting and talk to me again and I won’t wipe out Manchester.” was totally on pitch - I could actually hear and see in my mind's eye John Simm saying it.

Great characterisation on the young (and old) Doctor and Master.

A spell check would have helped ie it was a little jarring to have to translate 'rips' as ribs several times... but that is really such a minor thing compared to this wonderful piece.

Any more?

Bloody hell! Brillant fic :D loved it. Wishing it wasn't one shot :p

great work! I loved reading about Theta and koschei:-p

This is beautiful and frightening and the best Doctor/Master fic I've ever read.

More, please. :)

Oh, and could you please post this on 'A Teaspoon And An Open Mind'?

I'd add you straight to my Favourites. :)

Ta,

Erya.